i find omitting notes like 00:59:455, 01:06:313 etc weird, ik it's probably for a 3/2 break but not representing the relatively clear/strong syllable seems a bit off to me
my suggestion would to be to map these notes and find some other way to incorporate these breaks, depending on what you mind / dont mind omitting, for example you could delete 01:03:205 (28,29) to get 3 consecutive 1/1 breaks here
applies to all repetitions in this kiai and last 2 kiais