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00:13:380 (13380|2) - 00:14:793 (14793|0) - 00:16:233 (16233|0) - 00:17:149 (17149|2) - Little nitpicky but shouldn't these reach up to the next LN? Ex. 00:13:380 (13380|2) extending by 1/12

01:36:730 - same

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ok

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00:14:191 (14191|1) - You need to readjust the LN length to 1/3.

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oops fixed

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ok

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oops, not sure how that happened

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00:21:102 - 00:22:516 - 00:23:301 - 00:23:380 - Missing notes for the toms?

Same applies to other buildup 01:44:898

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too silent, i prefer giving emphasis to the louder ones

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00:23:380 (23380|3,23458|2) - Here, I recommend changing the direction because the melody changes from (00:23:537 -). https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19299082/c701

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Good point, just flipped it

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00:25:736 (25736|0,25814|2) - Here, the song structure is similar to 00:23:222 - so you can use double.
Also, I recommend expressing the cymbal sound of 00:26:364 - as triple. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19299084/7078

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Works for me, I've changed it basically to your screenshot but altered the streams a bit to avoid the one-handed trill at 00:26:207

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00:25:736 (25736|1,25736|0,25814|0,25814|1) - Same as top diff i think you can make it weaker, just like 01:49:924 - is better

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Went with a dumpier approach, let me know how that seems

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ok

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00:32:647 - 00:33:118 - Unintentional triple?

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u right

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00:34:217 - I recommend switching at the 3rd point because the sound repeats and switches 4 times rather than changing the position at this point. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19299087/5bb9

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Yeah, I have no idea why it was like that lol

changed/fixed

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00:36:259 (36259|1,36259|0,36338|2) - Both of these drums are super faint so I personally wouldn't include them, but if you still want to I would reduce 00:36:259 (36259|1,36259|0) to a single

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00:36:259 (36259|1,36259|0) - is staying a double, the oyther one is removed

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00:37:202 (37202|2,37202|1) - This double placement seems a little out of place to me, the accented sounds here are actually on 00:37:123 - 00:37:280. I probably wouldn't advise putting doubles for both so maybe you could represent them with a slightly different LN pattern?

00:39:715 -00:42:228 etc. - Same idea

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u r out of place (applied)

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00:38:772 - 00:48:825 - Same as top diff too, try to make it a bit more intense pattern

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sure, just copied from top diff here

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00:39:008 (39008|2,39047|1) - This burst doesn't start until 00:39:086 so I would either remove 00:39:047 (39047|1) or both notes

00:44:034 (44034|1,44034|2) - same idea here but with a chord

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theres clearly the burst starting where i started, only rearranged 44:034 to make it go well with the triple

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no, i aint using a chord, only rearranged to make it consistent with the other burst

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00:43:877 (43877|1,43955|0,44034|1,44113|0,44152|1,44230|0,44270|1) - I would try to hand balance this a bit better, if you apply the previous mod there should be enough room to do so

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adjusted some stuff

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00:47:961 (47961|2,47961|3,48275|2,48275|3) - 00:50:474 (50474|2,50474|3) - How come these are doubles? If anything I would expect them to be graced to continue the flow of the section

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adjusted some stuff

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00:50:356 (50356|1) - I would personally suggest making this into a normal note, there's a really distinct cutoff at 00:50:395 so having the LN bleed into it feels a bit weird to me

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00:50:395 (50395|0) - made it a doubl for the pan crash sound

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realy tehcnical language mnmn

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00:50:709 (50709|0,50736|1,50762|2,50788|3) - I would suggest following the snapping on top diff for this, although you can keep the extra note at 00:50:709 (50709|0) if you like it

Similar point that 00:51:024 (51024|2,51102|0,51102|1,51102|3,51259|2,51259|3,51298|0,51298|1) should be snapped on 1/3, same as top

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rearranged some stuff

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00:55:107 (55107|3,55107|2,55186|0,55186|1,55264|2,55264|3) - Considering the visual aspect, I think it's better to switch with ctrl+h. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19299090/a819

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I'd personally rather keep this as-is for the anchor, I think it's more interesting to repeat the pattern rather than mirror it

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00:56:521 (56521|3,56678|3,56835|3,56992|3,57149|3,57306|3,57463|3) - Not sure if this is intended as it could definitely be balanced a bit more by moving some notes around, mainly 00:56:599 (56599|1,56678|3,56757|2) - , and it feels a little bit too much for this diff here

01:06:573 - 02:24:479 - 02:29:505 - Same here

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should be more balanced now, but had to rearrange some surrounding patterns so worth rechecking

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ok i think

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fair, dopn

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done

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make fun of me for this and i will delete my gd

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00:59:034 (59034|2,59034|3,59113|0,59191|1,59270|2,59348|1,59348|0,59427|3,59505|2,59584|1,59662|2,59662|3,59741|0,59819|1,59898|2,59976|1,59976|0,60055|3,60133|2,60212|1) - The pattern here is underwhelmingly easy personally consider the anchor and LN usage previously, don't really see anything wrong by making snares triple so at least i think it can get some buff from there

01:09:086 - Same

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Adjusted a bit by making the snares triples

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01:00:291 - 01:00:919 - These aren't exactly the same sound, but I think they're similar enough to be mapped consistently. I would use the pattern at 01:00:291 for 01:00:919 as well

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rearranged sum shit

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01:02:254 - Missing note for the piano here?

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im silly

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01:02:804 to 01:04:060 - The piano should be snapped to 1/3

01:10:343 - same

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ficks

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01:05:631 - Shouldn't this only be a single? Compared to 01:05:474 (65474|2)

Similarly you have a missing note at 01:05:866 and another double at 01:05:945 so I would suggest bringing 01:05:945 (65945|0) down 1/4

same thing at 01:13:170, should be single and there's a missing note at 01:13:720

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essay mopdding for sin gles lets go

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01:06:259 - Might consider something more complex here as literally both extra and another is denser here

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sure, buffed this with some extra LNs

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01:12:306 (72306|2) - The piano sound is cut off here, so LN is used. I recommend changing it to a normal note. (all dif same)

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Changed on my diffs, I'll post this on Bumpy's as well

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01:16:311 (76311|2,76351|3,76390|0,76429|1,76469|2) - is it intended that you have 1/6 trill in top diff but it's 1/8 here, same at 02:34:217 -

If it does end up being changed here some your lower diffs might need changes accordingly

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Yeah it's intentional, I wanted something similar to Extra since this difficulty is the next one up, but not going too crazy with trills like top diff

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01:22:987 (82987|1,83065|0,83144|1,83262|1,83301|0,83380|1,83458|0) - This could be hand balanced a bit better, it's a bit of a jacky OH trill right now so even just flipping the columns for 01:23:262 (83262|1,83301|0,83380|1,83458|0) would be helpful

02:40:893 - same

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rearrngaed

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02:00:448 (120448|1,120448|0) - This feels like a really weird spot for a double LN, I would personally remove it or a reduce it to a single so you can fit a triple/quad at 02:00:605

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okldokok

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02:05:317 - 02:05:631 - Same as modding in top dif. I think it's better to write it a little shorter since there's no need to place LN too close to here. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19299099/52c4

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I wanted to keep top diff as-is, but I can change this one a bit

Shortened it to a 1/12 snap

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02:05:317 (125317|2,125317|3,125395|1,125395|0,125474|2,125474|3,125552|1) - 02:15:369 - i think if you want this diff to be a bit smoother this could probably be changed into rolly jumpstream given that previous stream pattern is mostly rolly, kinda subjective tho

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I'd prefer to keep it similar to top diff and really emphasize these screechy synths. The jumptrill vs split jumptrill is perfect for spread her imo and changing it would lose a lot of impact

going to keep

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02:12:542 to 02:15:212 - There's a really big dip in LN usage here that feels a bit out of place to me, a little bit undermapped overall

For example you could map in synths at 02:12:620 - 02:12:856 - 02:13:092, add some lengthier LNs for the fade at 02:13:170 and other changes to avoid switching from full LN -> full rice

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did some stuff

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02:14:427 (134427|0,134427|1,134741|3,134741|2) - These play a bit weird to me since the layering is basically the same as the big melody + kick hits 02:14:270 (134270|3,134309|2,134584|1,134584|0) so maybe you could adjust the emphasis here a bit?

For example you could switch the rice to singles and LNs to graced triples like this:

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done?

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02:17:804 (137804|3) - Wonder if this is intended since top diff didn't map this 1/4 note, guess either way could make sense but maybe it would be better if both diff can align with how it is mapped at 02:16:547 (136547|3) - maybe

Kinda similar question for 02:19:374 (139374|0) -

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02:17:804 - 02:16:547 - removed notes on this diff

02:19:139 - is a bit different in that I want to do full 1/4 on this diff as dump, but I want to use the quad release on top diff to emphasize it there. It's a bit inconsistent but I'm going for different effects so I think it's alright

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02:27:346 (147346|3,147385|2) - I would personally suggest removing these, it's not really worth a burst, even this small.

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02:29:191 - 02:29:427 - Missing notes

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fixcd

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02:31:547 - Somehow feels weird that nothing gets changed here despite drums' rhythm changes significantly, probably just add some changes for 1/4 like 02:26:521 (146521|1,146521|0,146599|3,146599|2) - would be enough, although it needs to have a bit more of that here

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There is a small change here, which is the addition of the chord at 02:31:861 (151861|3) -

it's not major but I do think it makes a noticeable difference, since there's now a trill at 02:31:704 (151704|3,151783|2,151861|3), and an anchor with 02:31:547 (151547|3,151704|3,151861|3,152018|3)

I'd prefer to keep this as is but you can reopen if it really needs a buff

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02:43:327 - 02:44:584 - I think this is harder than top dif, so how about switching the patterns?

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It's less hand balanced but should be easier now

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