00:23:134 (23134|2,23219|3,23391|2) - Would be good to switch columns so 00:23:134 (23134|2,23219|3) - is 4-3 like 00:22:877 (22877|3,22962|2) -
00:23:905 (23905|1,24077|1) - stack o , 00:24:591 (24591|1,24762|3) - stack x , 00:25:277 (25277|2,25448|1) - stack x . 00:25:962 (25962|2,26134|2) - Stack O, but there are inconsistencies such as 00:26:648 (26648|3,26819|3) - Stack O , 00:27:334 (27334|2,27505|2) - Stack X . Unintentional jacks can be involved in unintended difficulty increases for players, so it seems like a good idea to bring consistency to the stacks.
00:44:648 (44648|1,44819|2,44905|3,44991|0,44991|1,45162|2) - Make this match 00:22:705 (22705|0,22877|3,22962|2,23048|1,23048|0,23134|2,23219|3) - for consistency
00:45:334 bit of personal preference but i think all of the longer lns in this section dont really benefit from having an extra note next to them while some of them in that section dont, I think removing all of the added notes on the side of every ln could be nice, or else put notes beside all of them to keep consistency
01:18:762 (78762|3) - , 01:20:134 (80134|3) - 01:21:505 (81505|1) - 01:07:791 (67791|0,69162|2) - I think this should be a long note as it is presented here. Since we used long notes for the sound of the synth being divided into 1/4, I think it would be more appropriate to change the notes here to long notes for consistency. Consider rearranging the pattern accordingly.
01:23:734 (83734|3,84077|2,85105|0,85448|1) - Not sure what the intent of these long notes is. Personally, I don't think there are any sounds that would be appropriate for a long note. If they have a specific intent, it would be nice to have an explanation, and if not, it would be better to just replace them with rice.
02:11:734 (131734|1,131819|2,131905|0,131991|1,132077|2,132162|3,132248|1,132334|0,132419|3) - since you have made everything in this singles you can probably do something similar at 00:43:962 (43962|3,43962|2,44048|1,44134|0,44219|3,44305|2,44305|0,44391|1,44477|3,44562|2,44648|1,44648|0) -