00:12:129 (3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18498405/cff2 i would have done this for better flow, remeber if u take this advice u have to implement it for every section
00:33:964 (2) - this note feels off, the beat hits a little before the circle. I tried moving it onto the yellow tick on 1/7 (I do not think that is correct) but it felt closer than with the purple tick on 1/3
This overlap doesn't fit ur whole map idea
00:36:626 (1,2,3) - ^
00:39:734 (3,4) - ^ usually u do those overlaps at the sliderend, i'd still continue with it even if it is a other section
00:13:681 (1,1,2) - ^
00:34:342 (1,2) - ^
(F.e 00:41:418 (2,2) - i dunno if u wanted that but this would be a overlap u could try for the suggestion comments i made)
i change some, but i kept 00:39:734 (3,4) because there's no vocals between them (and it visually looks like 00:35:199 (3,4,5)
00:56:121 (1) - remove nc for all sections, there is no need for it
00:56:712 (1) - ^
00:23:592 (1) - ^
00:28:124 (1) - ^
the spacing difference in these two 01:23:615 (1,2) - to 01:23:900 (1,2,1) - these 3 feels kinda awkward to play. maybe make the last 3 equidistant? just my opinion though