00:10:313 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - these jumps dont flow too well. main reason is because there is a lot of wide angles.
00:10:624 (1,2) -
00:11:557 (1,2) - its mainly these 2 that messes it up. and there is an very easy fix to this . just make the angles a bit sharper from the object before. So something like this would work out
00:10:313 (1,2,1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18423610/f841
00:10:935 (1,2,1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18423614/9087
00:11:557 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18423617/9417
00:19:329 (3) - you could keep it consistent and put a pattern like 00:18:085 (1,2) instead
could also help making the 1/1 flow [ 00:20:261 (1,1,1) ] a full bar by putting a note at 00:19:950
00:24:458 (2) - personally i think this slider feels more natural if it is one tick longer (so if it ended on the white tick instead of the blue)
01:03:940 (5,8) - I think the way these repeat sliders are placed in the streams can be frustrating to hit and also inconsistent with the way it is placed at 02:19:018 (3)
01:04:561 (8,1) spacing is too large between this repeat slider and the start of the next stream
01:34:562 (1,1) - this deviation from typical rhythm is very sudden, although it does fit the music there's a loud drum hit halfway through the red slider , and results in the spacing between 01:35:028 (1,2) being very big