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00:19:946 (1,2,3,4) -感觉作为开头塞得有点满了,我的建议是3删掉然后把4滑条放到3上(用滑条踩2个音顺便削强度)1.png

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00:20:914 (5)00:23:126 (5) – 把前者的滑条长度改成和后者一样吧,毕竟两个强调的音的长度都一样的

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00:24:370 (1,2) -1/2改成1/4吧,因为这里的吉他音挺突出的,但是你用1/1就强度降低得太多了(和前面相比),也不够突出这些吉他音。这样子改会比前面的强度高一些

00:25:338 (3,4,1,2) -建议是跟回吉他音,因为前面00:24:370 (1,2) -你在跟吉他音,但这里的3你又突然切回去跟鼓了

结合前面两点,于是这一段可以这样子改2.png

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00:26:582 (3) -把它变成3连如何,这里有3连鼓

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00:27:489 (7) - would be better to end this 00:27:766 - here i think

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00:30:315 (5,6) - 00:32:527 (5,6) - 感覺把這兩個曡在一起比較好,因爲如果鼠標從動然後不動反而可以凸顯00:32:665這些比較大聲的音

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00:37:642 -00:55:338 -这段改成跟人声吧,因为人声是这段最主要的轨,你这样子硬跟鼓会显得很僵硬。开头你可以这样子踩音3.png

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00:39:793 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - could use some simplification, rn its too many active clicks for such a calm part of the song

00:40:346 (3,4,5) - can turn this into a 1/4 reverse
00:39:793 (1,2) - or maybe turn these into 1/2 circles

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00:49:609 (5) - this is kinda weird since all of the rhythms before this were mapped quite actively and this is just skipping over alot of the stuff, would probably change either this to match the rest or add more down time in the previous stuff in this section

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00:49:609 (5,6) - also kinda weird to have a jump here when jumps are like almost never used in this map

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ds fixed and changed 00:49:609 (5) - into a circle

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00:49:670 (5,6) - 換成一個 1/1 滑條比較好吧,00:49:808這裏的音沒有旁邊的大聲不至於要放clickable object

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01:02:466 (2,3,4) - i think this would be better as a repeat since this section is quite calm

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01:06:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -可以看出123你在跟人声,但后面被鼓干扰到了,所以被鼓带着走了,因此4567应该换回跟人声。这段可以这样改4.png

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01:10:761 (1) - 这里开始切人声的

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01:08:333 (7,1) - 這個有點觸犯guideline了,因爲01:08:333 (7,1) - 這裏的1/2間距跟附近的1/1間距01:07:780 (5,6) - 看起來一摸一樣,會讓新手以爲是1/1rhythm gap

https://imgur.com/a/ZCfTWaP 換成這樣剛剛好

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01:08:610 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -这段的问题和上一点一样,可以这样改5.png
01:10:822 (1) -把1/2滑条换成1/4+单点?这样可以把人声给踩全

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01:13:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -1前面应该可以补个单点?这样就把3连鼓踩全了
把3换成两个单点吧,可以把鼓踩全,同时曲子里鼓的密度也升高了。
把6换成两个1/4滑条,这样可以把两个最突出的鼓踩上,同时代表强度的变化
节奏和排列可以这样子来放,图中7和8可以表达两个突出的鼓6.png
01:15:246 - 01:24:094 -这一段和上面一样,我就不继续说了

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01:14:416 (6,7,8) - 感覺ctrl+g 節奏比較好,只是個建議不知你覺得怎麽樣

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01:27:135 -加上单点如何?前面你都在跟那个突出的电子音,这里缺漏掉了

01:27:688 (5) -这个单点应该可以删掉,因为这里电子音消失了,也没有鼓来支撑它

01:31:145 -这里加个单点?因为电子音又出现了

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01:32:803 (1,2) -我觉得应该把1的nc取消掉,在2上nc,同时把它们两个拉开,因为2才是下一段的开始。就像下面这样7.png

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01:38:964 (5,6,1,2,3) - would not suggest putting active 1/8 right after the tapped 1/4 because this is essentially 220 bpm and that is already really high

could maybe make the part before a 1/2 slider or a 1/4 repeat or just remove the 1/8 burst since there are only 2 in this entire map

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01:39:378 (1,2) - also normal-hitnormal if u dont remove it
00:26:383 (1,2) - same here

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removed 01:39:378 (1,2) and added hitnormal on 00:26:383 (1,2)

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01:39:578 (1) -前面加个2个note变3连吧,可以把鼓踩全,ds拉近些就行。

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01:40:960 (6,7) -顺序调转一下?因为滑条放在后面更能强调后面那个音。就像这样8.png

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01:52:850 - 02:10:545 -这一段和01:06:398 - 01:24:094 -这一段的处理相同,我也不继续说了。sv应该可以变一下?毕竟这里的人声更高了,整段的间距也可以再大些

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我还是希望维持sv

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02:03:356 (6,7) 我建議換成 https://imgur.com/a/l8KfT5Q 。因爲不像01:59:486 (1,2,3) - 這些有明顯的人聲或者大聲的樂器。1/2滑條感覺太過了

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02:12:481 (8) -02:16:905 (8) - 02:21:329 (8) - 02:23:541 (8) - 換成圓圈效果比較好,不至於那麽强

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02:10:545 (1,2,3,4,5) -把4删掉然后把5移到4的位置上如何?这样可以突出口哨声9.png
02:12:757 (1,2,3,4,5) -^
02:19:393 (1,2,3,4,5) -^
02:21:605 (1,2,3,4,5) -^

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02:14:969 (1,2,3,4,5) -或许可以改成4个1/2滑条?这样可以踩突出的4个音10.png
02:23:817 (1,2,3,4,5) -^

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02:16:567 (7,8) - think this is just better rhythmically as a 1/2 slider instead of spamming 1/4 sliders

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02:16:905 (8,1) -ds爆炸了,这不大好吧,而且也没有音支持你这么做。建议是把1拉回去8附近。

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02:18:564 (5,6,7) - 7改成和前面56一样的1/4滑条如何?因为这3个note的音都是一样长度的
02:27:96 5 (7) -^

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