00:10:258, 03:16:568. Pretty subjective. Since these sounds feel like echoes of the main sound, their emphasis feels a bit strange and I feel like removing them would make the moment clearer and create a deeper sense of spacing. I also feel like removing 03:27:863 and 03:28:215 would make the ending clearer and put a clear dot in the map.
I see the idea
00:50:274 (246) - this one is pretty similar though so not the only place
Since I'm not focusing on the vocal layer, it feels a little forced. Would work fine with a different structure I believe
01:30:157 - Can add a kat here, i believe it fits with what you are going for. Also, 01:30:333 (607) - would work nicely as a finisher as well.
02:19:568 (204,205,206) - It'd be cool if these notes were changed to kkd so you keep mapping to the synths, gives it a nicer approach.
I added notes here 02:28:127 (282) - / 02:36:598 (366) -
to make sense in this kiai to keep it consistent. I wanted to make this kiai different from the other two as the vocals are much louder here so I wanted a shift in density.
lmk if I missed any
03:27:863 (701) - Remove?
In my point of view, having this note is a little too excessive to enter out of the map because there isn't a "major" sound like there is on 03:27:510.