Only real advice I have for you for this map is that you should work on having sliders complement each other more and not just feel like you placed objects on the playfield, what I mean by this is having sliders feel like they're a part of a pattern, examples of doing this could be either overlapping, blanketing, or simply having sliders point at each other. Since a good chunk of the slider patterns I feel like I could delete one of the sliders and not many people would see it as an incomplete pattern. You could try having more implied slider movement by having objects placed in the direction the slider is going, which is a good way of having sliders that depend on each other and form a pattern. But overall a decent map, keep mapping more and I think you'll be a p good mapper in the future