01:05:506 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
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01:10:695 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
its the same 1/3 sound but you decided to do it differently for some reason (one more spaced than the other) its kind of inconsistent imo
also 01:05:506 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - flow is a little bit weird
01:20:316 (1,2) - ctrl+g would better represent the piano similarly to the snap aiming you used at 01:05:506 (1,2,3,4). could also remove nc for consistency.
01:27:884 (1,2) - i think spacing could be buffed here since its like the climax of the piano scale buildup
01:39:722 (2) - could be 3/4 to emphasise the high note, since its very different from 01:29:344 (2)
01:48:154 (2) - holy plz consider reducing sv here, u'd think it's a 1/2 slider by the looks of it..
or just not overlap 01:48:316 (1) - with anything instead it'd also b readable
02:21:560 (1) - would keep using the kick slider jumps like 02:20:911 (2,3) here since the sounds are still the same and the sudden change in active rhythm is unpredictable and odd.
02:41:830 (3,1) would be nice to reduce spacing between these two since this is a pretty large 1/4 gap and the vocal on 02:42:154 (1) isn't strong enough to support it in this section which is much calmer
02:59:884 - would be cool if you could make this active for consistency with 03:00:857 (2,3). e.g. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18441104/f98b
03:01:938 (2,3) - missing a beat here, could add to the start of the 1/3 stream for consistency with 02:46:587. e.g. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18441111/637c
03:08:425 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i think the spacing of these could be lowered, and 03:09:398 (1,2,3,4) spaced a lot more, since the piano rises and becomes very high at the end
I use 03:09:722 (1,2) - as a representation in the intensity reset here, that's why I differ in having more distance. Other than that, I fixed the stream cus it was really shitty XD
03:09:073 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these flow rly bad with the other bursts here imo, i'd recommend instead of making jump streams change the angles a bit so they connect better, and make the second burst a gradually increasing stream.
e.g. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18447498/d1c5
03:15:398 (3,3) - how about making these 3 active circles per slider instead? Could show some variation in rhythm for the last chorus since it is higher pitched, it'd work well imo.
03:40:046 (3,4) - i feel like this is a bit of a diffspike and could be nerfed, maybe just stack onto 03:40:208 (1) since the rest of the part is pretty chill anyway
03:47:668 (4,1) - just a tad bit unfortunate that u didn't make some cool 1/3 patterns here, similar to 01:05:181 - would b cool, cuz it just suddenly feels like an insane diff imo lol
03:53:506 (1,2,3) - personally would recommend making this a reverse slider instead as it can imply the song is getting calmer with lower rhythm density, and it might be hard for people to read or expect the triple as it is completely overlapped and right after a very long and slow slider implicating an end.