01:01:814 (15) - You could remove this note to match the omission at 01:02:688, although I understand why you put a note here and not at the omitted part so either could work.
Clearer drum hit and vocals on the earlier point + no need for another break so I'll keep the note.
01:04:288-01:04:725 : The back-to-back multicolor 1/4 patterns seems pretty hard for a Muzu, and also seems like a bit of a diff spike.
Maybe kkk ddd for a nerf?
kkk ddd
Or you could do kkk k d like what you did at 01:14:773-01:15:210. I like this more actually - more consistent + works with the spread.
kkk k d
Changed and moved the harder 1/4 to the kiai section instead
01:22:492 : Volume change directly on a note. Please either make 01:22:492 = 70% or 01:22:456 = 50%
70%
50%
I think the barline addition messed them up. Fixed.