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00:02:733 (2733|2,2837|1,2940|0,3147|2,3250|1,3354|0) - 这两个用一样方向的流个人感觉有点怪,因为合成器音高走向不同,建议把后面00:03:147 (3147|2,3250|1) - ctrl+H,1轨的两个可以不动,因为低音部分应该是相同的

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owo)b

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00:03:147 00:09:768 Why here is only single. Considering 00:04:181, this should be double as well. Is there any special meaning to make it only single in the 1/4 stream? And also maybe 04:54:250 and 05:00:871

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all added D# double

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00:03:250 00:03:354 have same sound like 00:02:733 (2733|2,2837|1) - and 00:02:526 (2526|0) -
00:02:733 (2733|2,2837|1) - vs 00:03:250
00:02:526 (2526|0) - vs 00:03:354
you should add notes for these. this part is simple part. don't need to mind that small gap

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虽然这些都没有从一开始就没有按照音高排列,不过确实这样会更好一点w

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00:03:975 (3975|2,3975|0,4181|3,4181|0) - 和 00:10:595 (10595|0,10595|2,10802|0,10802|3) - 可以考虑做成同轨的,因为他们是完全相同的可以强调一下

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ao!

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00:11:216 (11216|3,11216|0) - 其实这个音相对于 00:11:423 (11423|0,11423|2,11630|1,11630|0,11837|3,11837|1) - 是明显更弱的 可以考虑只做个单押·

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ao!

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00:12:664 (12664|1,12664|0,12768|3,12768|2,12871|0,12871|1,12975|2,12975|3) - u can use 2-1-2 pattern to reduce density and create gap

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这里稍微改了改,改成和主难度一样的排列了><

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00:14:319 (14319|3) - can move to col1(1|2|3|4) to reduce pressure from 00:14:319 (14319|3,14475|3) -

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是的w

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shide

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00:16:802 (16802|0,16802|3) - 建议移动到2、3轨,然后00:17:009 (17009|2) - 移动到1或者4轨去。
原因是前者的音阶明显和00:17:009 (17009|2,17216|0,17216|3,17423|0,17423|3,17837|0,17837|3) - 不同,既然00:18:250 (18250|2,18250|0) - 可以作出区分那这里也可以作出区分。
00:20:113 (20113|0,20113|3) - 00:23:423 (23423|0,23423|2) - 00:21:975 (21975|1,21975|3) - 00:25:078 (25078|1,25078|3) - 也可以和他们之后的两个/三个音阶相同的LN作出轨道区分,可以在主难度也应用这一条

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是的w

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00:19:906 00:20:319 missing a clap

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啊,这里对歪了qwq

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这里都是旋律双压,然后加一个note作为clap,并没有考虑double triple的问题
不过为了一致性,还是全部都改成旋律两条面吧w

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00:20:113 (20113|3,20113|2,20113|0,20526|3,20526|0,20733|1,20733|3,20733|0) - 这三个时间点,第一个和后面两个的合成器的音高是不同的吧,建议拆开

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是一样的啊,都是 F 音 ><

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00:21:354 (21354|3,21406|1,21457|2,21509|0,21561|3,21561|1) - u can simplify this place to create gap like:

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owob

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00:28:181 - double? same as 00:27:147 -

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前面带人声,所以double了,这里没有

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00:32:319 - 这里是否可以采一个Growl bass?

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光鼓就可以了w

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但是三压变成了二押,感觉差不多了,主难和次难难度差别也不是很大

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< 但是非常非常非常非常想要后面的文字压:3 2 1对应不同面条数,5.3*应该可以打这种排列了

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00:40:181 - 和主难一样变成321吧🥺

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好w
但是这样摆的话后面就有点鬼畜了,我先这样看看有没有人会找w

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00:43:078 (43078|3,43181|3,43492|3,43595|3,43906|3,44009|3) - Continuous minijack on col 3, is there any reason for that? This should be available to make some adjustments. You can hear 00:43:906 the sounds are not in the same part as the previous two, so maybe you can only move the col of the last minijack. Same as 00:50:526, 02:29:837, etc

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啊回错难度了,这里节奏不一样,所以换了一种写法

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00:44:526 (44526|3,44578|2,44630|1) - 这个荡的有点奇怪,我感觉主难那样更好点

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00:51:147 - 00:57:768 - same suggestion

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是的

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00:47:630 - 和主难提的建议一样,最好能和 00:48:613 -的pattern做点区别,因为两个声音不太一样
我的想法是这样,只是一个参考

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可以,主难因为难度原因没改,这里accpet了

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00:50:837 - 这个地方没有别的音色,个人觉得最好是单吧

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00:50:733 (50733|3,50837|2) - 这两个音明显更强一点

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00:51:457 (51457|3) - 是否是ghost note?(因为我听的背景只有saw声音且即使是侧链影响也不是在这里开始)

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单纯是dump

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Add note on 00:51:975 . You expressed a similar vocal sample on 00:52:492 (52492|1) - .

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Also on 01:31:647 . Minijack or 1/8 will do for this . similar expression used on 01:33:147-01:33:561

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00:51:975 sure catch! i add one note here too w 02:37:906 (157906|2) -
01:31:647 sorry i don't understand here, drum triple here and all in 1/4 snap i heard. and i don't want to use other anchors ww

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00:52:802 (52802|0,52802|1) - 这两颗是不是可以移到3/4轨并交替位置一下让它和00:52:699 (52699|3,52699|2) - 这两颗构成一个双押纵(是这么叫的嘛?uwu)

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00:59:940 - 也许少个LN?和00:59:113 - 一样的

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是的,这里也改了

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01:01:699 - 感觉这段省略的太多了,最好能把鼓点也写一下,不然太空了

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是的

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01:10:906 - 01:17:526 - missing note

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?这里没有音啊,我没听出来

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01:11:630 - 像这样用LN连起来感觉会更好

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01:11:423 (71423|3) -01:18:044 (78044|0) - 把这根面延长了w

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01:16:181 missing note on col1 , it should be the same as 01:17:009 (77009|3) -

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欸嘿

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01:22:802 - 这里用全米就行了用LN有点spike

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这里是特意这么写的,keep ><
而且用短面很酷很好玩!!绝对不是因为spike问题

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01:22:802 - 这些LN是...?而且为什么这后面都变成single note了uwu?

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是抓的一段一段逐渐升高的那个音

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连续的鼓就写成2押了,3押太满了

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01:33:147 Here I would like to suggest making here more gradual, from single to double, ignoring snares you caught here since they're not prominent.

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感觉目前也可行

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01:38:009 (98009|1) - 这个LN没必要吧?因为01:37:906 (97906|0) - 这个是1/2长度的Vocal

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按照音高排的,而且这里写1/2太塞了

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01:54:871 Here there should be drum sound as well. Using double would be fit here. Same as 04:07:285

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02:06:457 - 02:06:664 - missing 1/4LN?

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这里声音太小啦就没有抓w 后面也有很多类似的音

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02:07:078 (127078|1,127078|2,127181|2,127181|1) - 双押放在左手上?其他地方类似的pattern的双押都放在左手或右手

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02:06:664 (126664|1,126664|0,126768|1,126768|0,127078|2,127078|1,127181|2,127181|1,127492|3,127492|2,127595|3,127595|2) - 这里是特殊的地方,有其他地方没有的 yeah yeah音,在主难度这里也加难了

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02:07:181 - 去掉一个note

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这里是特地的,你看主难这里多了个四押也是,对的 耶!!!!!!!!!!!的声音

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是的

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On 02:29:423 Might be better if you put the minijack on col 2 instead of col 1. It also compliments the minijack
at 02:30:044 .

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The anchor here is not one left and one right,i think it's unnecessary

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02:38:526 (158526|1,158733|2) - 这个感觉可以都改成1/2长度,和实际长度更接近

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这里感觉没有太大必要,太长了有点卡手w

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啊,确实是w

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02:57:975 - 02:58:802 - 02:59:630 - 03:00:457 - 之前都没有出现过真四押,而且这一段乐段就这四次,按照一致性建议删掉四押中一个键,可以的话也可以把前面的LN的小尾巴延长到这里

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两段的侧重点不一样,改三押太简单了

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03:04:595 I may know what you mean, but triple seems to be overmapped here. You can consider one of the double LNs as the replacement of single.

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03:09:871 (189871|0) - 往右移一列不然第二列有点空

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这里应该还好?这里就没多少音,我想把短促的vocal写成子弹

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也许03:13:285 - 和03:13:388 - ,,03:13:492 - 和03:13:595 - 成锚?如果是采那个四连音的话

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是的

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03:14:526, 03:15:147, etc for these doubles behind doubles, I would like to suggest still making them triples for the strong drum or snare sounds. only double jacks seem not to be enough strong

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03:23:423 - 这里用1/8和主难有点区别

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改成1/4了
而且我现在才发现这原来是1/4而不是1/6

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啊呸,这里是1/8,不是1/12

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03:24:044 - 这段的单点note是干啥用的,声音和03:22:388 - 是一个声音吧

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减弱的 哒↑哒↓哒↑哒↓哒↑哒↓哒↑哒↓
你看主难的减弱短面就知道了w

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03:32:319 - 也许新开一列?这一个点降调挺明显的

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是的,后面都挪了一个列

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04:08:319 - 这个note是采?并且个人感觉有必要采04:08:423 - 的人声

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这里都没踩人声,全是后面的鼓,这地方人声和鼓一起踩感觉就没意思了><

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aaaaaaaa还是采吧

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04:24:871 - 这里感觉还是抓主旋律好

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感觉这里的低音很有特色,所以很想dump一下w

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04:25:078 (265078|0,265130|1,265233|0,265285|1) - 1/8缝用得有点奇怪+突然,最好换成3/16,或者省略掉04:25:233 - 这个1/8

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改成3/16缝了

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04:38:423 (278423|1,278423|0,278526|0) - 可以把连点和LN放在不同的手上,这里次难度比主难度难。

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挪到1了

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04:40:113 Unused green line, please remove it

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05:01:181 - 05:01:285 - 可以采,首尾呼应(

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owob

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05:05:009 - 05:05:423 - 05:05:837 - 个人感觉还可以补俩仨个note上,毕竟还很明显,05:04:595 - 还用了双押,如果补上那几个可以更好淡出个人觉得

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owob

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