I think either 00:13:564 (13564|3,13671|2) - should be a 1/2 LN or 00:10:135 (10135|3) - should be 2 1/4 notes for consistency
Either way, since the LNs are following the trombone 00:13:778 (13778|0) - would work well as a 1/1 LN to stay consistent with 00:10:350 (10350|1) -
same with 00:37:564 (37564|0) - and 00:37:778 (37778|2,37778|3) - vs 00:40:993 (40993|0,41100|1) - and 00:41:207 (41207|3,41207|2) -
as well as 02:06:707 (126707|3,126921|0,126921|1) - vs 02:10:135 (130135|3,130243|2,130350|0,130350|1) -
00:14:850 - I think a note should be added here since the vocal notes at 00:15:278 (15278|0,15707|2) - are represented
hmm if I'm correct about this part following the vocals 00:16:778 (16778|3,16993|1,17207|2,17421|3) - may need to change a bit to match up with the notes at 00:16:564 - , 00:17:100 - , and 00:17:421 - . I might be wrong though
01:39:707 (99707|3) - miiiight need to be deleted since a note wasn't added in for the trombone at 00:10:564 - . Not a huge deal either way though since there's a kick
01:42:707 (102707|0,102814|1) - hmm I kind of feel like a 1/4 pattern is a little out of place in this difficulty since it just covers the reverse cymbal, imo it isn't as justified as the 1/4 kicks at 01:35:850 (95850|3,95957|2) - , for example. Imo a single note would work better here
01:56:635 (116635|1) - if this isn't covering the synth (totally fine if it is btw!) I'd recommend making this a regular note so there's more separation between this part and earlier vocal LNs like 01:53:207 (113207|2) -
But yeah if it's a synth LN it's cool as is