Yomi yori Kikoyu, Koukoku no Tou to Honoo no Shoujo. - Mogari -

00:01:937 (9) small detail but you should really try to better fit these sliders with the contour of the stream: https://ibb.co/mF26n5d

00:07:119 (2,3,4,5,6) cool idea, but this isn't the best thing to do to follow the music. the emphasis here falls on the white ticks and the rapid back and forth of these kicks doesn't do much to emphasize them.

i would stick to streams, try something like this to lead into that triple you got: https://ibb.co/jhR7q1z

00:09:028 (1) i would make this a 3/4 slider for that iconic scream

00:12:573 (6) new pattern coming thru, good place for a new combo to show that

00:40:664 (2) I would space out this circle, the stack is pretty underwhelming

00:41:755 (3,4,5,6) this rhythm is off because of that ignored blue tick, the drums actually start on 00:41:891. try this more accurate rhythm: https://ibb.co/RTVpNBH

00:47:210 (1) this 1/1 gap is out of place with all that sound going on, a 3/4 slider here would do much better

01:04:119 decelerating streams like these should mainly be used for 1/4 rhythms that are actively changing in pitch. your streams at the intro (00:00:301) were a good place for them, but there is no change in pitch in this drum roll, so stick with a constant ds here

01:05:755 (1) having an inactive white tick is generally not a good idea, especially here because of that strong sound on it. i would make this a 3/4 slider and put a circle on that white tick to make it active

01:18:846 (1,2,3,4,5) - The drums pause here so these are just mapped to nothing

01:19:664 (13,1,2,3) - NC start on 1st reverse slider instead of 2nd, make it consistent with 01:15:573 (1,2,3) -

01:54:710 (9,1) - NC here just feels weird for the kicksliders, make them under the same NC

03:28:664 (1) - Maybe CTRL+G

03:35:482 (2,3) 03:36:846 (7,8) - These two stacks I find kinda odd, I would space them apart

03:40:323 (6) - This is snapped to 1/8th for some reason, it should just be on the red tick. It's also pretty underwhelming for the sound

03:53:754 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Maybe NC the triples

03:58:118 (17,18) - NC these reverse sliders, make it consistent with 04:00:299 (1,2) and 04:07:936 (1,2) -

04:13:936 (6,7,8,9) - NC here, make it consistent with 04:15:572 (1,2,3,4) -