00:56:373 (1,2,3,4) - i'd remove the 1/4 gap inbetween (prob by adding a repeat to each) to make it more satisfying
02:40:568 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i'd shorten these bodies (maybe these lengths? 02:51:105 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - )
04:59:906 (1) - plspslplsplsplsplspls make this a spinner (tbh i don't get why a sword, unless you meant to pair with this? 04:21:251 (1) - which i also think doesn't rly fit the song well, but tbh i can't think of anything better)