frog summer

Hard + Sunshine. 00:18:333 5% volume pattern, this may be hard to hear over the song since it is a silent pattern rn, try to raise a bit his sound of around ~40%

Greenline begin from 00:02:681 looks offset, you should resnap all of these after moving a timing point

First timing still needs to be moved. As i can see, i think -4 would match better.

i still hear some off sync with 00:10:015, i would suggest to use something similar at this

16,333.333333333333,4,2,0,100,1,0 9349,331.491712707182,4,2,0,100,1,0 10011,320.855614973262,4,2,0,100,1,0 10333,333.333333333333,4,2,0,20,1,0 10666,333.333333333333,4,2,0,20,1,0

Tags on Hard diff are in conflict with all other diffs, make sure to copy paste all the tags on all your difficulties

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drum-hitclap.wav drum-hitclap2.wav normal-hitclap.wav normal-hitclap2.wav soft-sliderslide.wav soft-slidertick.wav soft-sliderwhistle.wav

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title and artist are fine to me, DESKPOP is a discography building for who's wondering

add instrumental in tags

MP3 is fine to me

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Current hitsounds are lacking of feedback on the most of the instruments, this lead to a misinterpretation song and we don't wanna this happens, you would add whistle on some piano like 00:09:353 00:10:333 00:10:499 00:10:999 00:11:166 00:11:665 etc.

what about to add a normal-hitclap on sounds like 00:10:019 00:11:332 00:12:665 00:13:999 etc. i think it would improve the music rappresentation

00:18:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - as Hard as Sunshine, hitclap sounds quite strong again, i would go with whistles instead

from 00:30:665 to 00:51:332 there's an absence of kick appresentation as well, try to identify all kick starting from these hints 00:30:665 00:30:999 00:31:999 00:32:332 etc.

00:31:332 00:32:665 etc. default drum-hitclap sounds wrong for me, what about to change this sound with a soft-hitclap instead?

from 00:09:353 to 00:30:665 would fit better a volume around ~40/45%
from 00:30:665 to 01:13:332 would fit better a volume around ~65/70%
from 01:13:332 to 01:32:665 would fit better a volume around 50/55%
01:32:665 what about to increase the volume to ~30/35%

Referring on past mods like this, section from 00:30:665 to 00:51:332 you're currently using just a pattern to cover the whole song.

All difficulties have this kind of problem which patterns repeats each other on the whole section, for example normal has this 00:30:666 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - , hard has this 00:30:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - and Sunshine has this 00:30:666 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - , i know it's the same rhythm but doing similar patterns without changing rhythm costruction would lead to a lack of variation patterning and boring section since the poor patterning choice cause the aggressive repetition of this. I'm sure you can do a lot of good rhythm variation with similar beats and i'm gonna point out someone for you for every diff:

Normal -> i see you're often repeating this pattern 00:30:666 (1,2,3) -, what about to vary with rhythms like these


same will impact on 00:52:665 - 01:11:665

Hard -> you're often repeating this pattern 00:30:666 (1,2,3,4,1) -, i think you can make some different rhythm basing on these examples

Sunshine -> you're repeating this pattern 00:30:666 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - , since you're introducing 3/4 rhythms i think you have more variation choices like these examples

Hard + Sunshine.

These diffs, basing on section contrast, look like too similar for the all their sections, it does not follow a difficulty contrast considering the visual spacing of 00:09:353 - 00:27:999 vs 00:30:665 - 01:11:999 quite similar or the same except for SV. A good diff needs to identify and show how sections are different from each other giving more or less mapping intensity referring on song's intentions, your current situation is you are not following anything about it making these sections look like the same.
I'm pretty sure you are more inclined to decrease intensity on this section 00:09:353 - 00:27:999 since it's the quiest section comparing to the next one

Hard -> you could decrease your DS to something like 1.2x + make more 1/2 stack patterns like 00:10:499 (2,3) - 00:13:166 (2,3) - etc.

Sunshine -> you could decrease your SV to 0.80x since your shapes look so fast rn

offset is about 20ms early before 00:10:666 -

Metadata:
https://open.spotify.com/album/0WAAYVB1LZQrFAfxDMdX6U
https://soundcloud.com/deskpopmusic/leon-frog-summer
https://soundcloud.com/leyawn
https://deskpopmusic.bandcamp.com/

Remove your name in the metadata. Unless you've ranked a song under a different name there's really no reason to put it there.

Artist: leon chang
Title: frog summer
Tags: ~ fleeting moments ~ DESKPOP music electronic

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