Hmmm I think you miss understood my last suggestion...
02:43:675 (2) - I said to turn this slider into a 4 beat one means that you have to start counting from where it started like where the slider started is counted as 1 beat. this slider is 5 beats now. Soooo my suggestion in this part is to shorten this slider to make it a 4 beat (in other words shorten it until it ended on the white tick backwards). After that, move this circle 02:46:675 (1) to the white tick backwards and the slider after it on the blue tick backwards. there may be a gap between these but it matches the lyrics quite nice and its like a breather for the gap or something. Hope this will help
Ahh yes.. My mouse go brrrrr in a calming song...
03:33:087 (1,2,3) 01:30:264 (1,2,3) - Instead of triples, just do (1,2) 1/4 beat to match the lyrics. It is very unexpected to see triples at the "Glimppppse.. of us 🎵🎵"
00:33:087 - You've missed a spot. Try adding creative 1 beat slider to fill it up.
00:30:264 (4) - Well this is weird.. To match the lyrics, you have to turn your snap divisor to 1/8 and increase this slider to the yellow tick and get rid of one circle and the remaining in the yellow tick. Trust me its gonna match what your hearing.
01:06:087 (3) - Lower this slider a bit.. Try matching its distance from the other jumps (then the other jump after that is more further to match how you were mapping.)
00:36:969 (7) - Try to get rid of this slider and replace it with a circle on the red tick and 1/2 slider on the blue tick.
00:39:617 (7,8,9,1) - Try moving these until the spinner is starts on the white tick. then add another circle before this to fill the gap.
01:39:175 (1) - End this slider on a blue tick and start the next slider on the white tick and so on.
02:43:675 (2) - turn this slider into a 4 beat one and move this 02:46:499 (1) slider to the blue tick forward and add a circle before that slider.
Other than that since you are just mapping for fun, this is not good for ranking probably because of the type of song you've used and/or the type of gameplay. For these types of songs, it only goes to 4 stars or lower. other than that ill recheck if I missed something...