Deadly force

00:12:632 (12632|2,12932|0) - u could make these double LN here to stay consistent with 00:09:632 (9632|0,9632|3,9932|0,9932|3)

something like this

00:16:134 (16134|1) - sek, bedanya sama 00:17:534 - apa? solo sound aja, bukan melody. kalo ga ada bedanya, mending delete biar lebih jelas representasinya

00:17:034 (17034|0,17234|0,17434|0,17634|0,17834|0,18034|0,18234|0,18434|0,18634|0,18834|0,19034|0) - this is quite the anchor you've got here, consider nerfing it lmao

00:20:434 (20434|1,20434|2,20534|0) - bisa dipindah ke kanan 1 col buat PR

00:21:134 (21134|1) - del, walaupun ada suara, representasi dari 00:20:834 (20834|0,20934|1) - jadinya kurang

ntar 00:21:234 (21234|2,21334|1) - ke 23 (atau keep jg ga masalah sih, lower pitch soalnya)

00:21:434 - sampe 00:26:034 - yg ternyata kurang jelas & inconsistent:

kalo dibuat simple: contoh part 00:21:434 - sampe 00:24:134 - aja

1. ngikut basic instrument: 00:21:734 - 00:22:334 - del, 00:22:534 - jadi 2x2 jack atau sepasang 2H trill
2. ngikut melody: 00:21:534 - del (soalnya 00:22:134 - kosong), 00:22:934 - add, 00:24:134 - del

ulangi sampe 00:26:034 -

00:29:332 - 00:29:732 i feel like the gap between here is too big and can make the map feel a little awkward bc it's empty for a bit too long. maybe U can add note at 00:29:632 since there is a slight guitar sound

ngeliat 00:34:634 - sampe 00:34:934 - ga cover 1/2 sound, ya sekalian jadi: 00:36:434 (36434|3) - del, 00:36:334 (36334|1) - double, biar konsisten & lebih jelas

00:36:032 double here for kick?

00:36:434 - missing? breaknya kerasa aneh sih full gitar, tapi kalo mau ikut kick snare, ga add jg gpp

00:36:634 - sampe 00:38:234 - sayangnya keliatan / kerasa random, ok lah kalo mau utilize the empty col, tapi konsepnya kurang dapet vs lagunya

anggeplah 00:36:634 - sampe 00:37:034 - itu 1 part, jadi part B (00:37:234 - sampe 00:37:634 - ) & C (00:37:834 - sampe 00:38:234 - ) itu kurang kena

ngeliat sendiri 00:36:634 (36634|2,36734|1,36834|2,36934|1) - 2 stack vs lainnya no stack

solusi: delete tiap 1/2 "setelah part" (00:37:134 - 00:37:734 - )
atau dibuat no stack part A nya (00:36:634 - sampe 00:37:034 - )
atau all ngasih sebiji 2 stack tiap part (ABC)

00:40:832 (40832|2,40832|0,40832|3) - does this really deserve a triple? i feel like a double max here is more fitting

00:41:034 - missing

00:43:834 - whole kiai

legit ini yg most concerning kalo dimainin, ga ada pedoman "mana tempat yg harus dimulai stream (1/2)" dan ketambah random jack

gw bukan tipe yg bisa jelasin pake kalimat, jd kirim diffnya aja dah @discord
dari 00:50:234 - bisa copy paste

00:48:832 (48832|2,48832|1) - shouldn't this double be at 00:49:032 -

00:49:729 (49729|0,49829|0) - does this really need to be a minijack?

00:50:634 (50634|1) - 00:52:234 (52234|1) - 00:53:034 (53034|1) - sengaja ikut dub dub tak atau melody? kalo melody, yg laen udah bener, ini aja yg salah

00:52:032 (52032|2,52032|3) - what's this double for, the rest of the time notes like this show up seem to be singles i believe

00:54:732 (54732|1,54732|0,54732|3) - this should also be kept as a double to match 00:55:032 -

00:55:834 - sampe 00:56:334 - trill motion buat LN lebih masuk feelnya, trus finisher 00:56:434 - dibuat searah sampe 00:56:634 -

00:55:934 (55934|1) - bisa lebih gila sih kalo mau, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18484387/b7e0 plus konsisten sama 00:56:434 (56434|0,56534|1) -

00:57:429 (57429|1) - https://i.imgur.com/3CyGPKa.png

01:01:726 (61726|3,62026|1) - id suggest removing these since the solo stops at 01:01:626 - and without any break in the stream patterning it feels like you've just missed the end of the solo

would suggest doing the same for 01:08:126 (68126|1,68526|1) -

01:01:728 - miss double (melody), liat 01:02:028 -

01:02:328 (62328|0,62328|1) - melody / LN starts 01:02:428 -

01:04:628 - add LN col 1 konsisten sama 01:05:428 (65428|3,65628|3) - plus suaranya dimulai disana (01:04:628 - )

01:13:834 - uhhhhhhh 01:13:434 -

01:18:734 - ga dobel?

01:25:732 (85732|1,85732|0,85732|3,86132|1,86132|2,86132|3,86532|1,86532|0,86532|2) - maybe u can rearrange like this to represent rising pitch in music

more left to right direction

01:31:429 (91429|3) - omit this and have 01:31:529 - be a double instead, seems so much better

01:32:132 - missing double for consistency?

01:32:734 (92734|3,92734|0) - split / simplified? kalo simplified gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18483568/7e97

kalo split yaa LN terakhir ganti ke normal + add 01:32:800 - ke tangan kiri

01:35:034 - 01:38:234 - 01:39:834 - 01:40:734 - 01:41:134 - 01:41:934 - 01:43:134 - sama kyk #3616259

01:42:932 (102932|3,102932|0,102932|2) - triple here seems a bit over the top, and also missing double at 01:43:132 -

01:44:032 (104032|0,104032|2,104032|3) - similar to before, make this a double to match 01:44:332 -

01:45:134 - dibuat simple gpp, 1/1 aja

01:48:934 (108934|0) - mending delete, lainnya ga ikut tss tss