Deadly force

00:01:834 (1834|0) - not really sure what this note is for, i don't hear a noticeable music queue to keep this
00:05:034 (5034|2) - this too

00:02:434 - as with other diffs i believe the song here is stronger and patterns should be adjusted to represent it. here i would move 00:02:534 (2534|1) down to it and maybe shorten 00:02:034 (2034|3) and move 00:02:334 (2334|0) down

00:02:534 (2534|3) - since this pitch is different than this 00:02:034 (2034|3) - consider putting it into a different column

00:03:934 (3934|0) - i'm pretty confident this is supposed to be representing the sound at 00:03:834, and if it wasn't i suggest you move it there because the guitar is much louder

00:04:232 (4232|3,4732|1,5132|2) - these should just be standard 2/1 LNs, they sound weird not being that

00:05:434, 00:05:734, 00:06:034, 00:06:334, 00:07:034 - add another note? the music is louder than the single notes inbetween 00:06:634 - 00:06:834
00:19:834 - 00:20:434 - here also
00:26:234 - 00:27:134 - these as well

00:11:034 - 00:11:834 - i think this should be mapped similar to 00:09:434 - 00:10:234, they both have the same thing that you mapped at 00:09:434 - 00:10:234 although the latter is less noticeable

00:11:234 - missing note?

00:22:634 - since you are mapping the guitar, use this pattern https://ibb.co/frQzSRj (not more than 5 consecutive 1/2 notes so it fits RC)
00:24:234, 00:25:834 - here also
00:27:434, 00:34:634, 00:36:234 - maybe these as well, not really confident tho

00:32:432 (32432|3,32732|2) - see novice mod on this, same thing applies

00:36:134 - ghost note?

00:36:134 (36134|2,36234|3,36334|0,36434|1) - this is the only time 4 consecutive notes are used in the entire difficulty, and considering the song is 300bpm, i think it's fair to simplify it a bit

00:36:532 (36532|0) - shouldn't this start at 00:36:432 - ?

00:36:629 (36629|3,36629|2,36829|1,37029|2,37229|0,37429|1,37629|3,37829|2,38029|1,38229|0,38429|2,38629|1,38829|3,39029|0,39029|1)
00:54:829 (54829|3,55029|1,55229|1,55429|3,55629|2,55829|1,56029|0,56229|1,56429|2,56629|0,56629|3) - Avoid using more than 5 consecutive 1/1 notes. (converted up to 300 BPM)

00:47:832 (47832|3,48032|1,48232|2,48432|0,48632|1,48832|2) -Avoid using more than 5 consecutive 1/1 notes

though this one is at 6 so i'll leave to your decision

00:49:434 (49434|1,49734|2) - would suggest you move the point where these two lns meet down to 00:49:634 as the pitch shift is more audible there

00:54:234 (54234|0) - extend this ln to 00:54:834 (54834|3) and make 00:54:534 (54534|2) not a ln as the guitar is one long sound rather than two split sounds like before

00:55:034 - https://ibb.co/qyw5x6D maybe?

00:58:323 (58323|0,58523|1,58723|2,58923|3,59123|1,59323|2,59523|3,59723|0,59923|1,60123|2,60323|3,60523|0,60723|2,60923|1,61123|2,61323|0,61523|3,61723|1,61923|2,62123|0,62323|3,62523|0,62723|1,62923|2,63123|0,63323|2,63523|1,63723|3,63923|2,64123|1,64323|0,64523|2,64723|1,64923|2,65123|1,65323|2,65523|1,65723|2,65923|1,66123|2,66323|3,66523|1,66723|0,66923|2,67123|1,67323|3,67523|0,67723|2,67923|0,68123|2,68323|1,68523|0,68723|3,68923|0,69123|1,69323|3,69523|2,69723|1,69923|0,70123|2,70323|3,70523|1,70723|2) - Avoid using more than 5 consecutive 1/1 notes.

00:58:526 (58526|0) - why does this not start at the new beat line at 00:58:426 -

01:04:828 (64828|3,65128|3,65428|3,65728|3,66028|3) - i can't tell which instrument is being followed here, it doesn't seem like it's either drum or guitar. i suggest you focus on one of those instruments because it's familiar for the player to follow

01:14:229 (74229|2,74429|0,74629|1,74829|2,75029|3,75229|1,75429|0,75629|2,75829|1) - Avoid using more than 5 consecutive 1/1 notes.

01:14:432 - feels like there should be a note here to match the previous 3

01:36:729 (96729|0) - Long notes should be held for at least two beats.
this should just be a single note

01:38:929 (98929|0,98929|3,99329|0,99329|1,99529|2,99529|3) - Avoid using chords during consecutive 1/1 note patterns.

01:49:332 (109332|0,109598|1,109865|2) - these would play a lot better if they were 1/1 and not 4/3

01:49:732 (109732|2,109932|3) - maybe U can flip the lanes here to represent downward pitch in music

01:50:432 (110432|3) - from rc - "Objects should not be placed during a 2/1 long note's hold duration."

u could do something like this instead

or make the last LN a double for emphasis