00:19:020 (1,2,3) - spacing looks really low for a 1/2 gap here, considering 00:21:020 (2,3) - here you did it with bigger spacing. could be miss readed
01:57:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - not rly fitting pattern choice, rhythm goes by 1-2-3 so grouping and patterning shld be smth like https://i.imgur.com/EAAEPsg.jpeg or similar
02:40:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - rly asks for more spacing variety tbh, i.e 02:40:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - shld decel and 02:40:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - shld accel etc. with other ones