00:16:538 (2) - I think it can be placed a bit upwards so visual spacing looks better: https://i.imgur.com/DaTaWlb.png
ok
00:28:759 (2) - optional but I think you can make it a 1/2 slider + note, where the slider end catches the snare sound at 00:28:981 -
00:49:184 (3,4) - personally think the gap is too big for a 1/4 and may easily mistaken as 1/2 gaps maybe nerf the spacing a bit?
01:22:315 (8) - considering the direction of previous sliders (up down up down...) This one should point downwards instead I can't hear anything very special at 01:22:315 - to change the direction like this
02:24:989 - break should start at this timing point
00:59:630 - for 1st break