00:19:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - feeling like these jumps are a bit too clumped, they play a bit awkwardly, would benefit from more linear arrangement or, if you wanna keep the flow, a bit more spacing
00:31:943 - feeling like this could be a circle to mark the end of the vocals, or could make this 00:31:598 (3) - 1/1 instead
00:37:115 (1,2) - an arrangement like this 00:37:805 (1,2) - would be better imo, the implied movement of 00:37:115 (1) - gets broken and it kinda kills emphasis on 2
it can stay, the reason to nc 00:53:839 (9) - this is cuz its the last note and its on the start of a measue ie: a big white tick