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00:08:199 - 00:10:337 -
u map to the vocal for this starting section so i think u shd add notes to these timestamps, its the top diff so the density isnt an issue. also makes the mapping more coherent

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I like that a lot. Added.

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move 00:09:069 - to 00:09:123, the sv isnt applied because red lines reset the sv to 1x so the sv previously does nothing

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Fixed.

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00:14:055 (1) - spinner end is unsnappedd

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Fixed.

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00:32:833 (149) - would delete this since it isnt the same break as the 5plets like 00:31:131 / 00:32:266 + you dont use any 5plets right next to each other so it comes across as unintentional

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That also sounds way better, removed.

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00:41:023 (223,224) - Suggest we ctrl+g these notes. Just plays better plus the repeating pattern doesn't start until 00:41:509

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Swapped.

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I think I see what you're trying to do on 00:43:455, but I really recommend having 1.25x sv on there instead of 1.3x because it just looks ugly right now. If you want a faster ending note you can just put 1.5x there or something like that but 1.25x is just a lot better here in my opinion.

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It actually used to be 1.25, no clue how or when that got changed (fixed)

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00:49:293 (26,27,28) / 00:54:482 (69,70,71) - do u think kdk here would fit better since the high pitched chime things go x-x-x-x so k-k-kdk would show that nicely

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Yup, good catch.

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00:49:942 (31,32,33,34,35) - mapping doublet rhtyhms as you did with 00:55:131 (74,75,76,77,78) - would be much more intuitive imo, the drums have a clear blue tick double thing

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Missed that one, fixed!

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I would suggest moving 01:07:860 to 01:08:023 to be consistent with 00:26:509. Besides from that there isn't much going on at 01:07:860 so I believe it would make more sense to have the ddK at 01:07:942.

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That plays much better! Applied.

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01:09:077 (194) - Change this to D maybe cause uh 01:08:914 (193,194,195,197,198) - 5 1/2 K's lol
plus vocals

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01:09:239 (195,196) - you could also Ctrl+G these and 01:09:563 (198,199) - ctrl+g these

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Changed 01:09:239 (195,196) to d k (plays and sounds better imo) but applied the rest.

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01:21:887 (288) - seems like an artifact from copying rhythm from 00:45:563 (243), but there's noa ctual vocal to map and it seems super odd to improve here, should remove

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I think I had it there since I figured the pitch reached a certain threshold that would fit a d, but looking at it now it makes sense to get rid of it. (Removed)

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What about a spinner of the same length as the slider you have right now instead of the slider? I think a spinner would fit this sound a lot better than a slider 01:22:050 - 01:22:212

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I started by making it a spinner on all three occurrences but changed to to a slider since I thought that was less intrusive and confusing. Switched it back to a spinner.

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What would you think of moving 01:26:590 to 01:26:671 to create a kd kd kdkkd? This sounds a bit better in my opinion and the music also supports it better as far as i know (if you listen to it closely on lower playback rate). You actually already did this at 01:31:617 for the exact same sound so I would definitely suggest doing it!

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01:36:969 - same here

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There might be some more where you either forgot to do it or just had not really thought about it yet. If you want the difficulty of the patterns in length to progress you could do something like kd kdxxxx or something like that if you see fit.

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Really good catch! I've implemented it for all the fitting sections and it sounds great!

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Right now the section starting on 01:43:617 feels pretty repetitive to me. You did a good job variating the kkddk with ddkkd but a kdkdk still occurs like 4 times. Perhaps you could variate those with some kdddk (pattern still starts and ends with a k so it sounds quite similar). So for example you could make 01:50:104 and 01:44:914 a kdddk so it occurs 2 times while the kdkdk also occurs twice!

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Applied your example.

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01:56:428 - I would do something like this bcs I think the difference is a way too big - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17746035/11c5

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I think I will be keeping this one as it is since I feel it works better as a slower section (Then it also matches the sections at 00:43:779 and 01:20:104 which also seem better like this)

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02:08:428 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - even if this is a long pattern it might be nicer to use a coloring to emphasize the snares, something like dkddkddkd or some other blue tick emphasis could work (or use quads if you think it's too complex in the context of this difficulty)

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Chopped it up into triples, plays pretty well imo.

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