Sorry for not modding this. This map is hard to suggest, the reason is same as Tolyan. But I will give you a trick instead. You are 5 digits so you probably have a favorite map/mapper. Try to find the point what make you love this map/mapper and then using that point as a reference.
Really hard to judge the map, i just dont like aesthetics 80% of the time with bad overlaps or overused patterns. I dont see much creativity on the map. I see that this is far from the first map because first maps tend to be extremely awful. Id say your spacing usage is decent but it still feels like im not moving off centre of the map, you might wanna fix that on your new maps. Also i like the bg but its too blurry.
I really like your map but the slow parts and this buzz slider at 1:37:001 maybe you do something like this but not exactly https://www.mediafire.com/file/5xyxns6qxoz31aq/DJ_Sharpnel_-_Loveryteks_%2528Simred%2529_%255BFixed_buzz%255D.osu/file