Exit This Earth's Atomosphere (Camellia's "PLANETARY//200STEP" Remix)

00:07:580 - aka this entire intro section - the strong note hits every 3 sounds so how come the patterns aren't close-to-repeating every 3 notes? would make them stand out more, could have something like [412][412][143][143] if you dont want them too repeating as an example

00:12:380 (12380|3) - could make this to 1/2 LN because you did at 00:07:580 (7580|0) - this

00:15:680 - to 00:16:430 -

Why you suddenly breaking the flow pattern like Hydria said :(
I suggest to rearrange this to make flow pattern like previous pattern :3
Exceptional for 00:16:280 - and 00:16:430 - you could do like these: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18552295/dd98

00:27:230 (27230|3) - i'd move this to 1 and 00:27:380 (27380|1,27530|2) - to [2][3] for better pitch relevancy

00:29:480 (29480|3,29630|0) - move the first one to 1 and the 2nd one to 3 as the latter note is higher

00:30:230 (30230|2,30380|3,30530|0,30680|1,30830|2) - this should be [3][1][2][4][3]

00:30:980 (30980|1) - Move this to col 1 since you didn't make any 1/4 anchor like other's pattern

00:31:280 (31280|3,31430|0) - 2 and then 4

00:31:580 (31580|1,31730|3,31880|2,32030|1) - should go [3][2][1][2]

00:50:180 (50180|3,50180|2,50217|1,50255|0,50330|3) - suggesting to ctrl + h this pattern to avoid the awkward 00:50:030 (50030|3,50180|3,50330|3,50480|3) -

00:53:180 - add one note to 3rd column for the long sound + tick-like sound.

00:55:805 (55805|0) - is this supposed to be at 00:55:730 -

00:57:380 - there's nothing here that would require another LN to be started

00:59:817 (59817|2,59855|3) - Swap these columns because I feel like making stack 1/8 notes is kinda heavy, and also this is 200 BPM

01:00:680 (60680|1,60830|2) - any reason these aren't LNs?

01:00:980 (60980|0) - Why you don't make this to 1/4 LN just you did in 01:01:580 (61580|1) - ?

If you accept this, swap 01:00:980 (60980|0,61017|1) - these column. My reason is same as #3682799

01:01:655 (61655|3) - change LN length the same as 01:01:580 (61580|1,61617|2) -

01:02:180 (62180|0,62330|2,62480|1,62630|3,62780|0,62930|1,63080|2,63230|3,63380|2,63530|0,63680|1) - Good patterning!

I think this can also work to represent the music a bit more (Only if you're satisfied with it) -> https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/763538078417158175/1072415168690130954/screenshot357.jpg

why ignore note? :v 01:09:980 and 01:19:580 Like what u did on 01:07:580 (67580|3) - and 01:12:380 (72380|1) - and 01:17:180 (77180|3) -

01:23:180 (83180|1,83330|0) - Can prob extend the LN by 1 bar? Since the sound here is longer Like this sound here on 01:23:480 (83480|2,83630|3) - sounds shorter (Can playback rate 50% if u agree)

Like what you did on -> 04:47:180 (287180|3,287380|2,287530|1,287630|0) - (u could prob use the same pattern but re-arrange it)

01:24:980 (84980|2) - i think move this note here? ( 01:25:130 or 01:25:055 ) i don't trust my ears lol

01:26:180 - for the entire section, if you're following the drum pattern, it goes (for each bar): [1--4][1-3-][1--4][1-34](1234 for 2nd and 4th repeating sections), if you need more explanation on this just say so

01:35:780 - for this section, instead of reducing the triples here to better represent the vocal bits, why not make them mini LNs instead

01:35:930 (95930|0,95930|1,95930|3) - We need to move one of these notes to col 3 because you using jack 2 notes in 01:36:080 - , 01:36:980 - , and 01:37:280 - those sections

01:40:580 - here's an idea to give more identity to the 1/16 and the 1/8 pattern changes here: have the 1/16 patterns locked to something like [21][34] and [12][43] so they're either both pointing towards or away from the centre (i'd recommend doing 1 for one bar and the other for the other bar) and then having the 1/8 go in a straight line, whether that's 1234 or 4321

01:45:380 (105380|1) - the SVs in this map overall make it extremely difficult to read normally, and have zero warning / fluid transitions into them, i'd suggest either removing them entirely or fixing them to be more normalised / fluid

01:45:530 - 01:46:430 - missing notes on 2

01:46:280 missing note? Because there is a soft clap sound here, just like you put one here also 01:45:680

01:46:805 - missing sound that could be utilised

01:47:255 - this needs a note to transition better into the mini jumptrill

01:49:580 - i'd say this is the bigger sound out of this and 01:49:505 - so the later one should have more notes

01:49:730 (109730|2,109805|0,109880|1,109955|3,110030|2,110105|1) - why not have these grouped in pairs of 2 to match the music aka [33][44][22]

01:54:680 (114680|0,114680|3,114755|1,114830|2,114830|3,114905|0) - if you're not willing to repeat the earlier section here at least make this more exciting by putting minijcks in so something like [34][3][12][1] (and rearrange earlier pattern)

01:57:080 (117080|1,117080|2,117080|0,117230|0,117230|2,117230|1) - can change the pattern a bit? Because the sound here is different

Suggestion you can do -> https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/763538078417158175/1070554710626541638/screenshot352.jpg

Same in this part 03:11:480 (191480|2,191480|3,191480|1,191630|2,191630|3,191630|1) -

02:01:130 (121130|0,121205|2) - should match 02:01:355 (121355|2,121430|2) - in terms of design

02:01:580 - this should be more than a double

02:04:730 (124730|1,124730|3,124730|0,124805|2,124880|0,124880|1,124992|2,124992|3,124992|0) - these triples seem very weird definitely considering 02:04:880 (124880|0,124880|1) - is only a double

you think u can move this part? 02:08:930 (128930|0,129080|0,129230|0) - to col 2 for better hand balance so no torture for left hand
cuz rn it looks like this (02:08:180 (128180|0,128330|0,128480|0,128630|0,128780|0,128930|0,129080|0,129230|0) - )

02:09:380 - why is this not 1/8? if it's for the 1/2 chords you could just flatten down the left side and have the right side still be 1/8

02:18:080 (138080|2) - AIMod Error detected

Man, why you put shortest LN in here and this suppose to be normal note D:

02:25:730 (145730|2,145730|0,145730|3) - this does not need to be a triple

02:30:980 - why aren't the short chimes used in this section so the user isn't just holding two chords for over 7 seconds

02:32:236 (152236|1) - a lot of the notes here representing the violin are off sync

02:35:517 (155517|3) - this violin note doesn't change pitch.

02:37:917 (157917|1) - this violin note doesn't change pitch either

02:39:380 (159380|2,159380|3) - should find a way to represent the growl going on here since it's the most prominent sound

02:42:905 (162905|0) - move to 02:42:755 - to avoid the minijack as other similar sounds didnt have minijack like 02:45:155 (165155|3,165155|0,165230|2,165230|1,165305|0,165380|2,165380|3,165380|1) -

02:50:630 - this is just not as good as the original buildup, i'd rather see the original build up twice

can we copy 02:50:780 (170780|2,170780|0,170930|3,170930|1,171080|0,171080|2,171230|2,171230|0,171380|3,171380|1,171380|0,171530|0,171530|2,171530|1,171680|3,171680|2,171680|0,171830|3,171830|0,171830|1) - to 02:53:180 till 02:54:230 because they sound the same bit CTRL + H to reverse the patterning

Like this -> https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/763538078417158175/1088349253732159589/screenshot375.jpg

Also move this 02:54:530 (174530|1) - to col 3 to match it with 02:51:980 (171980|3,171980|2,171980|1,172130|1,172130|0) -

02:58:580 (178580|3,178617|2,178655|1,178692|0,178730|3,178767|2,178805|1,178842|2,178880|3,178917|0,178955|1,178992|2,179030|3,179067|1,179105|2,179142|0) - risky

03:01:580 (181580|2,181580|3,181580|1,181730|0,181730|1) - can do a bit more with this like having the 1/4 lines having single notes at 1 and then moving the red line double to [34]

03:02:480 - there is a hard beat every 1/1. i would expect a triple chord on every 1/1. i think there just needs to be some consistency cleanup all around this

03:02:580 (182580|0,182630|1,182705|2) - why are you no longer doing the harder mini trills for these notes? they were perfect for this and so should be continued

03:13:880 (193880|0,193880|1,194030|2,194030|3) - do some more LN stuff w/ these

03:40:580 - just have this be 1 LN with one single note and use the 1/2 sounds otherwise zzzzzzzzzzzzz

04:37:430 (277430|2,277430|3,277505|0,277505|1,277580|3,277580|2,277655|1,277655|0,277730|2,277730|3,277805|0,277805|1,277880|3,277880|2) - nope. the sound starts at 04:37:580 - and is 1/3 not 1/4

04:50:180 - idk man, this section having so many jumptrills/splittrills kinda just takes away from the melody; it feels unnecessarily dense. might be worth taking a step back and looking what actually needs note representation in this section, definitely considering the buildup after it is currently less dense for some reason

05:28:280 (328280|2,328355|2,328430|1,328505|1) - Suggesting to remove to change to singles since its not strong sounds.

05:40:205 (340205|2,340205|1,340205|3,340280|2) - this should be 2 doubles instead of a triple and then a single

05:40:505 (340505|0,340505|1) - remove as there is no strong sound occur to put double in here. With that this 05:40:430 (340430|1,340430|0) - can be triple and you can even add one note at column 1 in 05:40:580 -

05:40:580 - why all of a sudden, like 3/4 into the chorus, does it just get suddenly easier in terms of patterning?

05:44:555 (344555|0,344630|3) - would suggest removing these two notes to give more emphasis on the melody AND the jumptrill beats afterwards