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00:00:053 (1) - make this finisher? huge cymbal so i dont see y not

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yea done

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00:17:213 (37,38,39) / 00:32:573 (204,205,206) - can i ask why you didnt go for a finisher pattern here like how you mapped the rest of these crashes (ex 00:19:253 / 00:26:933)
theres nothing wrong with having a red tick finisher and a gap that ignores a downbeat, especially if there isnt any strong noise to map on said downbeat :p

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Im fine with ignoring the downbeat since the sound was strong enough, but imo the part doesn't flow enough to make that work well

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00:18:713 - could add a note for more vocal emphasis, it feels a bit like you switched to the drums here

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done

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00:54:773 - not having this barline sved feels kinda weird cuz it ruins the gradual slowdown feel imo, try using .925 sv or so for this

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could also do the same thing @ 01:02:453 - with .55 or so but given the slowdown stops at 400 its not necessary if u dont wanna

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done

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01:39:893 - ddk k ddk k d sounded a bit unfitting when i played through here, could be xxx x x xxx x instead (or make the second one a 5plet)

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done

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02:08:213 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - think using a rhythm like o-ooooooo would work better? its a really strong vocal and since youre bridging into using more quints as the kiai progresses i think using longer patterning would help show said stronger vocal

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I don' wanna do this cuz it would be pretty hard for a 7-note pattern out of nowhere but I reworked it a bit

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02:15:413 - godmode sv i love u

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02:32:693 - consider making this kkk, you ignored the cymbal at 02:25:013 as well

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I get the idea but I don't think this is necessary, the cymbol at 02:32:693 is much more pronounced than the one at 02:25:013

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03:19:253 - consider mapping here for the guitar since no reason to not map it imo

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done

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03:43:733 - guitar is doing 1/6 run here so the 1/4 feels way off

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oh yea I didn't notice

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