this 02:41:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - is a whole pattern with steam sounds so I would like to keep it as it is
02:44:874 (1,2) - this rhythm pretty much forgets the violin and maps the drums but you were following violin before, so id suggest rhythm something like this to get both the violin and drums on this part https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17427638/1d5c
03:36:566 (1) - id suggest using https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17427662/314a this kind of rhythm here to better map the violin again.
https://gyazo.com/e6df970f87579a0bcdf5c63c1207e514 something like this, maybe not exactly you have a lot of options, i just think its important that u try to actively map the violin all throughout this intro
04:08:028 (1) - after this you have 3 seconds of nothing, maybe extend the break time here.
06:30:997 (8) - there should be a change in this stream like a verse arrow or something due to his vocal, since you changed it on every other vocal during this phrase
in these ones I wanted to highlight these 06:30:535 - 06:31:151 - sounds which are super strong and making the stacked stream works p well imo. same here 06:59:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 07:44:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
well, 06:31:151 - is strong, but if we are looking at those drum things, 06:31:305 - is even stronger. The whole cymbal patterns also starts at 06:30:997 - as mentioned, with a crescendo of three hits, and vocal on that tick as well
imo this would be better if 06:30:997 (8,9) - was a slider as well then, or something
and same with the others (the location 07:44:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you linked is different though)
06:56:535 (3,4) - a bit weird, maybe turn kicksliders to regular sliders, just changing the SV
08:34:997 (1) - you map the piano here but 08:35:612 (4) - in this stream it is not emphasized
nc 08:53:458 (4) - instead of 08:53:151 (1) - for consistency with 06:25:766 (1) - and others
09:02:689 (1) - you map the guitar here but 09:09:151 (1) - here you map the drums and 09:10:074 (1) - there you map the guitar again
09:26:895 (1) - nc shoudl start here because of the way you did it 09:26:038 (1) - here (and the rest of this section)
10:11:398 (1,2) - this timing seems like it has to be wrong, and this part is actaulyl a triple in the song. I suck at timing so i dont have the fix for you but yeah
10:41:031 (7) - you should keep the same rhythm here that you did on all of these 10:39:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - since the violin doesnt change,
11:09:602 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - this should really all be active just like you did here 10:55:887 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
11:24:745 (7,9) - considering vocs are on these spots, it would feel better to maybe have 11:24:888 (9,10,11) - as one sldier instead or msth