00:42:205 (2) could remove it since there is no active sound here and ur chain is very long, a break would not hurt
01:07:340 (9,10,11,12,13), way too dense for a hard diff, rlly do not suggest any more than triples in hards
01:12:854 (2,3) slider 1/2 feels better, i don't understand why u increase spacing where there is nothing for it
01:27:773 (1,2,3) this is the quietest part of the song, I see no reason to use 1/2 sliders tbh
try 1/1 circles like the others do, it would better emphasize the music