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00:16:948 (1,1) - could revert colors mainly to put more focus onto the finisher onwards, playability wise, it probably could make it less monotone.

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either k d is fine but the vocal sample is barely audible anyway

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yee

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00:33:377 - i feel like a note should be placed here?

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00:35:520 - a speed change is not necessary with this note because it is already another rhythm (a NewCombo in terms of Standard).
can remain neutral at 1.00x.

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yee

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00:44:663 - change this to 1/4 + 1/6, like this -> https://puu.sh/Izspl.png

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picture doesnt work anymore and in my editor its already 1/6 kkkk :-D i probably get what u saying but the sounds are like 1/6 + 1/8 if the slider is removed for the suggestion

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I hate the system of 90 days of inactivity of puush to save images.
but yes, is better.

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00:46:020 - and 00:47:092 - delete these sliders, is preferable to take them as breaks.

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sounds boring to leave the weird sounds as breaks. players dont even have to hit the sliders so they are whatever fillers

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01:03:520 (1,1,1) - would suggest making it as ddk to keep the consistency with 01:02:949 (1,1,1) - and 01:04:663 (1,1,1) -

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01:07:305 (2) - probably delete this, i think a simple xxx x would able to work well here. This type of pattern is kinda hard to hit in higher bpm so yea.

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not sure about that but made ddkkd to follow vocals more clearly instead of the random kicks

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01:34:305 (1,1) - probably could flip this, i think it could improve playability since like i said, this pattern is rlly tricky in high bpm.

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01:42:948 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - kdddkkd would work better here, mainly for consistency with similar patterns (referring to 01:33:233 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - as priority), while i'm definitely sure it'll play better.

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01:42:948 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) changed just to kkkdkkd to keep the triple kat usage on the vocals

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01:48:377 (1,1,1,1) - can consider further extending the 1/6 pattern to 01:48:615 - ? If you don't want to have a 1/6 finisher there you can remove it. Don't forget to adjust the sv if you want to apply this

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01:57:091 (1) - perhaps make this a d? This pattern is quite evil imo so probs could make it less evil i suppose

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0 testplayers complained about them, and there is about 10 of them in the maps kiais

i want to highlight the vocals pitch usage with triple kats on the last vocals parts

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02:01:520 (1) - make this a don to better match the drum kick? Just like your oni.

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02:13:520 (1,1,1,1) - change them to kkkk, it is only one sound and the following Don note is better to emphasize the change of rhythm.

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yee

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02:25:020 - can't see the reason to make a 1/2 break here? You can consider adding a kat there.

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02:28:948 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - could probably go kdkdkkddk to highlight the sample better.

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03:26:948 (1,1,1) - by flipping these two

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02:28:948 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) changing to that color feels too similar to play with other patterns, so keeping to highlight the special snares

03:26:948 (1,1,1) flipping burgers

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02:46:520 - can probably add a kat here and 02:46:806 - to at least make some variation between those consecutive dons

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02:53:520 (1,1) - should be swapped? If you want to make the kat on the synth sound like 02:51:663 (1) - and 02:52:234 (1) -

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03:43:449 (1) - 5-plet sounds a bit too much here imo. Consider removing this to make it a 1/2 with a triplet?

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04:00:233 (1,1,1,1) - i dont understand why you started to go variety while the similar section at 00:40:091 - has alll of them consistent. Perhaps consider flipping them as such

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all of these are just my two cents, not rlly forcing u anyway but yea

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04:00:233 (1,1,1,1) - this repetitive sound section last 19 sec and this one 00:40:091 - 4 sec. i created a lot of variety on the longer one so it would not be just k d k d spamming the whole way

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04:37:520 (1) - if you specifically want to focus on the drum kick + want to make some pattern variation there you can consider having this kat removed.

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