00:08:561 (32) - the sv here is kinda awkward and the sudden volume change also feels odd imo. maybe keep it on 0.8x at volume 50%
00:09:643 (33,34,35,36) - I'd suggest to make the sv on the starting note (plain 0.9x) not declining one
and put the 0.8x here 00:10:262 (37) - to make it look cleaner imo
00:11:654 (44,45,46,47,48,49) - these inclining sv can be adjusted so the finisher seem more impactful and become a nice lead to the next section. Change the sv on these notes to 0.8x -> 0.9x
Keep the finisher 00:12:273 (50) - here at 1.0x. This should look nice to the player and make it a clear indication of the new section
00:16:139 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) - may look nicer with declining sv. Either 1x -> 0.9x or 1x -> 0.95x
The current one looks a little forced using 0.9x with no clear gap to make it look smooth
01:24:025 (23) - the sudden change of lower sv makes this look almost overlapping imo
Consider using a declining sv from the previous section (1.2x) instead of using lower sv without a gap (starting from here 01:24:011 (23) -) I'd suggest lowering it to 1.2x -> 1.0x. I've tried using 1.2x -> 0.9x and it looks a little odd imo.
Alternatively you can delete these 01:23:779 (21,22) - if you prefer using the current sv setup so the sudden speed change at least can be mitigated by a proper visual gap