00:13:869 (3) - can u like curve it the other way (like flip it horizontally) so u can angle it to not be mostly under 00:13:440 (2) - , looks cramped
00:14:512 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - maybe should nerf the amount of active 1/4 and like 00:17:297 (3,4) - as you dont use these things again until kiai kinda
00:17:297 (3) - can try using a slider+circle? Or do the same thing as in 00:15:583 (4,5,6) -, because the sound at 00:17:512 - is really strong.
00:40:440 (3) - it'd be interesting if there was a rhythm variation because the song wasn't the same with 00:38:726 (1,2) - . Variation in slider shape felt too minor to show that.
01:16:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - I feel like the spacing for this section is too much, as it has almost the same as 01:07:869 (1,2,3,4), and 01:07:869 (1,2,3,4) has way more intensity than 01:16:440 (1) imo