Maid with Dragons <3 (TV Size)

00:01:226 (1,2,3) - I think you could do something similar to 01:23:512 (2,3,4) - and use reverse sliders to contrast the differences in the two sections of music

00:05:297 (2) - You can use a reverse slider to follow the vocals in this section.

00:15:369 (3,4,5) - fix ds

00:16:440 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use 1x distance spacing on this

00:27:369 (2,3,4) - how about use this rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16974841/0513 feels a lot nice and represent accurately to the vocal

00:29:297 (1,2,3,1,2) - i think distance throughout this could be a bit clearer

what i mean is between 00:30:369 (1,2) - theres a long time between clicks but they look so close together and 00:29:297 (1,2,3,1) - snapping before this one doesnt make it easier to understand because you are kinda in a corner

00:32:726 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - chain seems a bit too much for this part,could cut it ,maybe on this 00:34:012 - would work by just using a circle

00:37:012 (1,2) - should be using the same spacing as 00:35:297 (1,2) -

00:50:726 (1,2) - these notes give sparse feeling though songs keeps the same intensity, try this to keep the similar rhythm between 00:49:012 and 00:50:726.https://puu.sh/IaNBU/3ddb5b42b2.png

00:51:154 - coulc make this a slider iff you want a stronger buildup now that u have an easy

like i see that u kinda need the 1/1 rest somewhere but you could match intensity by using a slider in this one instead

00:54:583 (1,2) - although this section has a lot of drum sounds, I think simplifying the rhythm with 1/1 sliders would be better. It helps players transition into the intense rhythm of the kiai section, creating a contrast. otherwise, the whole diff has too many 1/2 sliders

00:55:869 - 01:16:012 This section might be spaced a bit too much for a normal, since 1x is what people usually use for the spacing regardless of intensity for a normal.

Its up to you for what you want to do to fix it or keep it the same, I personally would lower the spacing though

00:57:797 (6,7,1,2) - would avoid how close these all are since you already are introducing spaced out patterns during the kiai so putting 1 right next to 7 may confuse new players as they could go to either 7 or 1 as they follow patterns directly

00:57:797 (6,7) - cld swap these 2 obj if u wanted to have the last vocal at 00:58:226 - as clickable since it is the highest part of this verse

00:59:297 (1,2,3,4) - 01:13:012 (1,2,3) - what about highlighting these by using 3/4 slider? I think it's reasonable enough as slider ends work passively, and this Normal has some challenging aspects. Using 1/2 in a row felt a bit boring to the song.

01:02:726 - move to 01:02:940 - so u can cover the main melody?

01:03:797 (3) - maybe could use two circles cuz vocals are standout

01:08:297 (2,3) - cld ctrl+g if u wanted to focus the vocals more since they are based on the red tick instead of the white one

01:10:869 (5,2) - na too confuse

01:14:297 (4,5,6) - It might be necessary to avoid this pattern, as it could make it difficult for new players to distinguish the start and end of sliders

01:16:440 (1,2,3) - you could try this rhythm. I think it's good because the music is winding down. Using sliders to express this section and letting circles emphasize the louder sounds could work well.

01:19:869 (1,2) - not sure,isnt this overlap is too hard to read for players here ? especially with the amount of reverses on around it

01:26:940 (1) - too undermap to me for ending part could replace this with two circles ,it would nice as well to make the last sound 01:27:154 - clickable cuz its strong/has finish