Analogy (TV Size)

00:03:502 - maybe add note here like u did on the rain

00:04:385 (6,7) - why didnt u add an hdash here when u added some on the previous parts with the same sound? kindly add

00:05:818 (2,3) - the sound on 3 isn't too loud for emphasize it as hdash for me just dash is enough can adjust by make 00:05:488 (1,2,3) - all distance here to 1.3x

00:07:142 (6,1) - quite a far 1/4 hdash since this is the calm part of the song, consider reducing

00:08:024 - try to add note here? it have vocal so it deserve

00:08:024 (3,4) - why didnt u add an hdash in here while u added one in the rain diff?? kindly add an hdash for consistency

00:10:561 - maybe add a note to cover the vocals in here since u are following the vocals throughout the map and its quite a bit odd that ur leaving out this part

00:14:752 - 00:15:635 - it's no sound on here so I would suggest to emphasize on this rhythm instead https://imgur.com/W7E3cSe ( first note start on 00:14:311 - )

00:18:282 (3,4) - try to make dash here because on (4) is have vocal like you try to emphasize on 00:18:723 (5,6) -

00:21:149 (1) - here you should adjust to circle + 1/2 slider for emphasize the cymbal on 00:21:370 - by hdash instead
https://imgur.com/dCeqyNm ( first note start on 00:21:149 - and 4,1 is hdash)

00:22:252 (3,4,5) - here should adjust to circle + 1/1 slider instead for make emphasize like you have did on 00:19:164 (6,1) -

00:22:473 (4) - maybe tilt this a bit more since the catcher is falling off by a bit when walking this cuz the sv u used in the map is a bit high

00:23:796 - here deserve to be hdash because it's vocal + cymbal instead of 00:23:576 -

00:23:796 (4,5) - maybe swap the movement in here for the snare on 00:24:017 ? quite weird that u are mapping the snare as slidertail.

you can do something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17144268/0eee movement between (4,5) and standstill on (5)

00:32:841 (5,6,7) - Imo here is feel sudden hdash with antiflow pattern it's not well with build up before so try to adjust to smth like this instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17134596/64ae

00:33:723 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe map this part like 00:37:252 (1,2,3,4) ? they have the same sound and its quite odd that u map this with different rhythm

00:34:605 - should hdash here because here is vocal instead of 00:34:495 - that's just low instrument

00:34:605 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - there are no prominent sound on the 1/4s and this a bit of an overmap, please stick to 1/2 in this part instead to cover both the vocals and kicks better

00:45:414 (3,4,5,6,7) - this part is cool for the buildup but unfortunately this is too overmapped and inflates the star rating, you could make use of 1/4 sliders instead

00:47:841 - 01:00:193 // 01:01:958 - 01:14:311

very sneaky copy paste ;3

00:56:664 (1,2,3,4) - should adjust this for emphasize vocal on 00:57:105 - more https://imgur.com/O9jiUH9 smth like this is fine

01:01:627 (3,4,5) - too much distance here imo 1.5x is enough

01:07:252 (1,2,3,4) - stream is too horizontal harsh should adjust to more curve here

01:12:105 (7) - make it 1/4 stream is fine the sound is lost here 01:12:216 - hihat lost 01:12:326 - vocal lost

01:20:046 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - can adjust to make more creative here if me I would do hdash on guitar sound 01:20:377 - 01:20:708 -

01:23:135 (1,2) - standstills on this buildup is a bit bland to play tbh, try to give this more movement for better presentation of the buildup

01:24:679 (6) - there really is no prominent sound to make this a 1/16 stack, it would be best if u make it 1/4 or 1/2 instead

01:26:774 (2) - x:335 (1.5x) 01:27:436 (2) - (1.7x) x:318 01:28:098 (2) - x:246 (2.9x) for make the ending more reasonable because the sound on 01:26:664 - 01:27:326 - 01:27:988 - is gradually increase