the rhythm in this difficulty is very inconsistent and many times doesnt follow the layers in the song properly. ill link some examples per section so u can get an idea of what to change
00:05:001 - 00:23:287
00:06:144 (3,4,5) - the rhythm here doesnt follow the guitar properly because the stronger guitar notes are on the sliderend of 3 and on the circle 4, but 5 is also tapped even though thats just a kick which isnt as prominent. suggest changing the rhythm to https://i.imgur.com/RjRyEkD.png. this applies to the end aswell
00:12:430 (2) - this disregards the guitar by not tapping on 00:12:858 -
00:23:287 - 00:41:572
00:24:287 - theres no circle here despite there being an audible vocal here that you mapped 00:23:715 (2) - here, and then you mapped 00:24:858 (5) - which has no audible vocal. suggest adding circle where its missing and removing (5)
00:26:715 (3,4,5,1) - these dont follow the vocals properly because 00:26:715 (3) - this has vocals on the red tick, 00:27:144 (4) - this is clicked but 00:27:287 (5) - this is also clicked even though this is a kick which ignores the vocal on the sliderend, and 00:27:572 (1) - this disregards the vocal on the red tick and additionally has a reverse on the downbeat so theres no emphasis.
theres many different executions but I would recommend the first one, https://i.imgur.com/QM26Yfk.png, this is also possible https://i.imgur.com/0Og75aF.png (note this has sliderend on vocal but the circles contextualize it well).
00:31:858 (5) - this could the snares here because theyre very loud. https://i.imgur.com/pNBObvM.png this works well
00:41:572 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - here you inconsistently switch between layers, sometimes u follow drums, sometimes u follow vocals, its best if you follow one layer or the most prominent layer at that time in normals because the players are at this level are getting used to the idea of listening to the song, its hard for them to follow multiple instruments at once usually. i suggest following the vocals here so its consistent with the rest and it's also the most prominent layer
00:53:001 - 01:15:858
00:55:287 (5,6,1) - similar problem to what i posted just above, mixing vocals and drums are hard to follow. 6,1 feel especially out of place because of this
01:01:858 (3) - putting this on 01:02:001 - would follow the snares better
01:09:572 (6,7) - these are offset by 1/2 beat, the vocals start 01:09:430 - and ends at 01:09:572
01:13:858 (4) - these start on kicks which are not the prominent layers here, the snares and vocals are mixed together on the reverse and the sliderend, which aren't emphasized because of that. suggest putting circles instead https://i.imgur.com/gOQn5bf.png
02:06:001 (4,5) - here it is good if you mix vocal and the snare x guitar because its more noticeable than the vocals. https://i.imgur.com/I3Lc7cm.png this works well, same applies 02:07:144 (8,1) - to the others
03:02:001 - should do the same as 03:03:144 (4,5) - here for consistency and following the song better
generally you need to focus on one layer unless the song allows for changing to another, and be consistent with the rhythm