01:21:427 - 01:24:864: It would be nice to swap the hand for each minijack to not put as strain on one hand like you did on the four jacks before
okee
01:27:989 - 01:28:927 and 01:45:645 - 01:47:677: since those are snare drums you could buff those parts to triple notes
owo)7
01:34:552 maybe a single note here to represent the vocals a bit?
addedd
01:39:708 - 01:40:333: since there are no snare drums here I think something like this would fit a bit more: https://imgur.com/a/Qenekzo
oo appliedd
01:40:645 - 01:45:333 this part feels a bit boring to play so why not spice it up a bit with single notes on the white lines and resemble the hi hat a bit with them?
added notes on the white lines