00:32:030 (1,2) - feels like this should have a hdash because of the higher pitch; same applies to the rest of the patterns where you didn't add a hdash because of this
01:37:630 (1) - don't think having this vertical would emphasize the sound on the red tick, since it's way different from 01:38:230 (3) - ; would curve it instead and maybe even add a hdash between (2,3)