Oxalis

00:02:611 (2) - I feel like you shouldn't skip the beat in the middle, the drum is way more predominant than 00:02:016 -. Basically do the same as 00:03:325 (3) - 00:04:040 (2)

00:38:682 (1,2) - Don't really think these sliderends should be snapped that way, would be more natural if they were snapped to 1/1s to match vocals. https://i.imgur.com/2SowWbp.png ; at the moment feels like you're ignoring these vocals for the sake of nothing, because there are no sounds in these 1/2 beats

00:45:468 - What about adding a circle here for vocals, feels quite empty as now

00:50:825 (3) - Vocal emphasis is near to 0 here, try removing the repeat and filling 00:51:182 - 00:51:301 - with circles

01:18:680 - Could add at least a 1/2 slider here, vocals around here are way too predominant to be ignored that wya

01:34:632 (1,2) - It's the climax of the kiai and vocals/drums are really intense, however your rhythms are way too underwhelming. I'd really suggest some kind of rearrangement here using more 1/2s rather than two 1/1 repeats

02:18:680 (4) - Could make the sliderend visible, 1/4 kicks like that have more leniency, but since this is 3/4 may be a bit problematic

03:10:582 (1) - This one should be shorten by 1/4, it makes no sense rhytmically as now because the violin is at 03:10:820

03:43:439 (1,2,3) - Musical representation here can be improved, if you hear carefully, the music starts decreasing its intensity from 03:43:439 - but then upscales again at 03:44:154 -. In summary, 03:44:154 (3) - mapping this in nearly the same manner as the previous two sliders doesn't fit that well, so try using some more engaging rhythms with 1/2 instead

04:22:011 - Not gonna lie but the whole ending feels way too underwhelming taking into account it's an Insane and more interesting rhythms can be used. You can try using 1/1 sliders with circles in-between and some more variations there, but as now it's literally 22 seconds of just clicking 2/1 sliders