00:28:150 (5) - This hyperslider would work much better as a 1/2 since the vowel actually ends in the red tick -> 00:28:337 - and there's a pretty loud drum right there that doesn't seem worth ignore it tbh. Make it similar to 00:40:150 (7) - would work better
00:31:525 (1,2) - distance of 1.87x here is kind of excessive, coming from the anitflow of 00:31:337 (7) -
01:07:150 (4,5) - pretty loud vocal, consider to make an hdash towards 01:07:337 (5) - for better emphasis like u did for the vocal at 01:09:775 (3,1) -
or swapping the hdash for 01:07:150 (4,5) - and the dash for 01:09:775 (3,1) - would also work in terms of contrast since both vowels have different pitches
01:12:118 (1) - would let this end on the white tick earlier at 01:14:650 (1) - so they have a bit more time to react to not get spinnertrapped since the bananas at the end of the spinner are on the left while the notes afterward are on the right.
01:37:618 (6) - this is severly early, would say it sounds better on 1/7 and with 01:37:806 (7) - deleted https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16182197/8ca7
01:43:337 (1) - really feels odd that this is a slider. would suggest mapping it like 01:42:212 (2,3,4) - since they have similar sounds