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00:06:533 - sv here really low as it intense section ,would be represent well if you change it to smth 1.5 to creat contrast with previous section

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i think 1.5 is a bit too fast how about 1.2 or 1.3 ? so it matches with the kiai part which is an intense section as well

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im just gonna put 1.2 cus yea^

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00:12:699 (5) - convert to two circles to match the vocal and consistent

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done

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00:13:033 (6) - nc cuz downbeat

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etc. look at the downbeat and nc at it ,looks bad without it imo

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i don't get it xd could you please explain it again in an easier language or w/out abbreviations ?

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i think i get it and it's done (i think)

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00:14:699 (7,1) - ctrlg the rhythm would be feel better and intuitive for follow vocal

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done

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00:18:033 (5,6,7,8) - visually really bad in my eyes ,could try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15609988/4dca

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done

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00:21:033 - 1/1 slider to represent strong held vocal dont see why you should do reverse here especially with nothing on middle of reverse 00:21:199 -

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done

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00:22:116 - there is a sound on this blue tick, you might want to map it since you also mapped 00:22:449 (6) -

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okay

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00:24:366 (1,2,3) - looks really bad, personally I would do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16017654/3272

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also this kind of aesthetic "problem" can be seen in a lot of patterns, you might want to check their looks

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thank you for the feedback!
i didn't really pay much attention on the aesthetic but i've changed some things to make it look better, if something still looks pretty odd, tell me :D

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00:38:199 (5,6,1) - the spacing here is too big for no reason

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changed the spacing

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00:41:533 - would just remove finish hs on here tbh since it passive rhythm ,finish hs usually used for clickable objects

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done

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00:43:782 (8,1) - would be cool if these not stacked cuz 00:43:866 (1) - ended up not emphasized while it should be emphasized

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done

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00:49:866 (3) - looks really bad, a cool way to make it would be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16017616/9341

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also you can make some kind of pattern with 00:49:199 (1) - if you make the curves the same like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16017623/8f95

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changed it

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01:13:199 - finish

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done

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01:21:533 (1) - cool slider <3, would be perfectly symmetrical if you move the anchor near the eye of mio down and left by 1 square with the small grid

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