Vitamins feat. world's end girlfriend

00:10:764 break like you had the next 2 times?
seems a bit inconsistent

00:29:133 (1) - could mute the slider ticks for this slider

02:10:913 remember when we talked about this a while ago, it would be good to set each slider ending sample to a drum sampleset [drum,auto] seeing how the slider start differs from the current one and the feedback just feels odd

02:31:489 (1,1) - there's no need to nc these, seeing how they follow similar intensity vocals

02:35:416 (1,2) - These 2 kicksliders don't really fit considering the melody is static here, recon youse could change it to circles to give it the same static feeling as you did in insane? Something like https://i.imgur.com/wa5Cc7x.jpg for example

02:36:044 would be nice to represent the vocal/melody here by not NC'ing every 2nd circle, something like this would be great https://i.imgur.com/nzxqAP6.png

02:39:185 (1) - could remove NC again for the same reasons as the other ones

03:21:515 till 03:25:049
It's a pretty big shame you're completely missing the strong drum hits seeing how it was mapped in the insane & that the hitsound feedback seems cut-off as all the claps are missing from this section. Like, this just seems weird & unfitting, I get that you're focusing on vocals here but to sacrifice such strong melody for it?

It would be nice to make some of the longer sliders like 03:23:400 (2) - shorter by 1/4 of a beat and to start it on the strong beat whilst placing a circle on the previous beat to keep things dense, something like https://i.imgur.com/HmxnHYU.png

The vocals will still be underlined but without the sacrifice of the drums, I just don't think it's worth it considering your hitsound structure

03:47:667 (1,2,3,4) - You could have mapped these like you did in the other similar instances, it feels really out of place structurally, something like https://i.imgur.com/ugFWIzk.png would feel much more fitting imo

03:57:405 (1) - idk why you guys nc so much, it's the same melody here D:

04:02:431 (1,2) - this being so highly spaced doesn't really fit with what the song has to offer, the sounds die out here, it would be much better to lower the spacing of this one, something like https://i.imgur.com/RVo1Ixs.png maybe?

04:26:149 (1) - could remove the NC seeing how it's not that intense and it would underline 04:26:306 (1) - a bit more