00:20:391 (1,2) - feels really empty for how much intensity increases here, I would use this rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15398684/0f25
01:08:713 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move objects to avoid the overlapping stacking, too confusing for new people. Something like this for example https://puu.sh/GahuE/4b733cfff2.png though i'd personally remove 01:09:317 (2) - as it doesn't add anything important to the verse