01:21:085 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - can be nicer if you used jump for vocals rather than somewhere without notable sounds
01:31:028 (3) - good to nc for sv change and to separate it from 01:30:685 (1,2) - pattern
02:24:857 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - unnecessary diff spike in context of this part, unprecedented dense rhythm is not well supported by the song. Try to stick to simpler choices here, e.g. 01:06:685 - pattern looks ok.
02:26:914 (3) - there's background sound but sticking to vocal with 1/1 slider looks better, taking into account rhythm you used here e.g. 02:28:114 (2) -
02:35:657 (4,1) - You did an emphasis for 1 here, but at 01:18:857 (4,1) - looks like you just weakened that, i think you should keep the consistency
03:19:542 (6,7,8) - You stacked 1/2 on 1/4 which is really confusing. You could just separate them or NC on 03:19:714 (7) - to make them distinct.
03:51:942 (3,4) - 1/4 gap is large out of nowhere and can lead to missed sliderend. Map used overlap or very small gap for it.
03:53:999 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - The combo setting seems to be inconsistent with 01:39:599 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - & 02:56:399 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - . I suggest deleting NC on 03:54:342 (1) - and 03:55:028 (1) - .