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00:15:627 (27) - can make this a finisher to emphasize the beginning of kiai and for the finish sound on the background

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if accepted, you can also make 00:23:127 (56) a finisher and delete 00:23:009 (55) for better game experience

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also happens on other kiais

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changed notes to finishers in all kiai

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00:18:201 - 00:25:701 - I believe these two should be 1/6 dddk in order to maintain consistency with the rest of the diff.

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personally felt that in first kiai these were a bit quieter and chose to not map them as 1/6 but see where you are coming from. changed to keep consistency

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00:18:322 - you can add a don here, there's a sound you might consider

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if you agree then you should add d here as well: 00:21:837 - 00:25:822 - and same to the rest kiais

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added. mapped some of these in later kiai not sure why didnt do consisntently

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00:21:720 - I think that here (and according to the previous mod) a ddkdkkkd (1/4/) is more appropriate

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00:22:654 - There is a definitive sound here, a scream vocal to be specific. Adding a kat here would be a good choice.

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yikes, unsure why i didn't map this

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00:26:877 (67) - k here to be consistent with 00:19:377 (38)

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also happens on other patterns like this

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00:28:752 - and here, according to the drums, sounds better a dkkddkdkdk (1/4)

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quite like the current pattern, no change on this

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00:29:575 (75,77,79) - change to k?

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00:30:627 - the change of SV here is very abrupt and overlaps the last note, so I would suggest you closing the kiai with 1.10x and putting 1.05x here 00:30:978 -

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As a second choice you could put 1.075x here 00:30:978 - and 1.05 here 00:31:330 - .
All this should be applied in the other kiais.

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reworked to have kiai ending with same sv and sv change to 1.05 1/16 measure later

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00:37:306 (109,110,111) - 01:07:306 (234,235,236) - I think dkd sounds way better on these two. The snare hit in the middle definitely supports this change.

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00:37:306 - this note is unwarranted, you should move it here 00:37:189 - and add don here 00:37:658 - to complete that stream, there's a sound you can't ignore

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reworked to k dkkddkd

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00:37:544 - add k, since there is a high-pitched sound

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00:38:712 - don , 00:39:064 - kat (to emphatize piano notes)

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disagree i'm not following the piano at all so just following it here would be super weird

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00:39:529 - pretty sure this light snare sound thing isn't here

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00:35:779 - same

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i guess so, on all other sections ive gone over and there is a sound (just double checking myself)

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00:41:408 - 00:41:525 - change these two for don, definitely the sound changes there

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dkkdkkd works better imo but still a change

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00:41:759 - you can turn it into kkd (1/8), more accurate

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i dont hear what you're alluding to and dont really think that changing to kkd in 1/8 is nessecary here

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00:42:111 - kat here and here, there's definitely sound

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00:45:158 - missing note here (i suggest you kat)

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actually, starting from here 00:43:986 - would fit a stream of this type very well: kdddkkddkddkkkd

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added stream but kdkkdkkkdkkddkd

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00:45:623 - I'm not sure what the intention is here, but, 00:45:624 - this green point right here is only ahead of the previous one by 1ms. Consider fixing this by your intention, if it is to speed up 00:45:623 - this note, then adjust accordingly. If it is to increase other notes' SV, then move it 00:45:681 - here so it won't look like it was a mistake.

Same also happens at 02:00:624 - here and 03:19:374 - here.

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the intention was to speed up the other notes without breaking the pattern 00:43:982 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164) - sv. moved the lines 1/8 back i guess seeing as it doesnt change anything for playability

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00:48:205 - actually here sounds 1/6, I'd suggest you dddk

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00:55:705 - same here, and check the rest

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00:51:837 - missing don here, and according to the rest of the map this note should be kat 00:51:955 - .
I would particularly recommend you try this pattern (starting here: 00:51:720 - ) ddkdkddkk (finish here: 00:52:658 - ), removing this note 00:52:775 -

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changed but dont agree with finisher comparing to 00:53:127 -

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00:59:809 (209,210,212) - remove the notes, because there are no sounds, and 01:00:044 (202) - changed to k

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no change on 01:00:044 (210) - becuase its same sound as 01:00:278 (211) - . removed other notes

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fixed

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01:11:408 - change this note to d
i hear lower pitch here

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i mean... i guess

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01:12:814 - I don't think this whole pattern follows anything. So, in order to follow drums, you can change it to this:

dkdkkkdkkddkdkkkdkkdkkddd. This exact pattern here. You can variate a little bit but you should get the idea.

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changed to suggested pattern except dkd at end

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this feels nice to play to me personally

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This whole pattern seems to be way too long for its complexity. Considering this is still an Oni, even on this bpm this should be adjusted. It also fails to focus on certain emphasis and tries to underline everything at once, which doesn't feel quite well to me. I feel like you should cut it in a few pieces, like this for example https://puu.sh/GlBfj/6c79d33af8.png

This suggestion perfectly emphasizes the most important layer, while just removing redundant notes that are not important enough to justify such a long pattern.

Somewhat the same for this 01:28:752 - , however I'd change this to dkk kkdkkdddkkk K, starting from 01:28:752 - instead, which again falls way better into the proper difficulty

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Reopened by Capu

01:10:705 - added snare flam i didnt hear before
about stream on 01:12:814 - i split it up but slightly different than your exact suggestion https://puu.sh/GlJQt/f77cc4a746.png . personally think the kick on 01:13:752 - is good enough to have a don here instead of kat and moved 276 from your suggestion 1/4 back to have 2 even numbered patterns (6plet and 2 plet) and then after odd numbered patterns. is more comfy to play for me in that way.
01:28:752 - i changed to your suggestion apart from instad of kkk K at the end i did kkd K at the end as pitch goes down slightly and having d K is more comfy than k K in my opinion

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01:10:701 - Well, this has to be a finisher. There are way too many flams that are mapped as a finisher and not as 1/8 doubles, so this has to follow it the same way for consistency.

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Reopened by frukoyurdakul

changed to finisher

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01:12:934 (256) - change to d, because it stands out among the 01:12:817 (255,257)

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01:13:982 (277,278) - Swap these two maybe? The 2nd note has a more distinct snare hit that can be emphasized with a kat in a better way.

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done, also ctrl g on 01:13:630 (278,279) -

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01:22:306 - dk is better for the snare hit on the 2nd note. Stands out much better.

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01:28:752 - Based on this change I think you can apply something similar by following the snares: #1654153

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following suggestiogn to follow snares changed to dkkdkkdkkdddkkkdk

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01:33:205 (361,362,363) - there's no 1/6 sound here and it's inconsistent with other pattrens like this. so suggest removing it

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also happens on 01:48:205

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i thought it created fun effect but agree with your argument on inconsistency. removed

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01:37:072 (374,375) - You should swap these two in order to emphasize the snare hit properly like you did on 00:52:189 - this spot.

Related: And 01:52:189 - here you can use (starting from 01:51:955 - here) ddkkdkkkk to variate between patterns since I believe that was your intention.

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reworked stream at 01:37:072. the idea was indeed variation to not make the map feel too repetitive so followed second suggestion as well

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01:43:748 - I can see you are trying to increase the density but, listening to the music I can say this is mapped onto nothing specific, it just plays shallowly. Consider removing most of the notes and make it a rhythm like 01:41:873 (397,398,399,400,401) - this instead. The drum attack at 01:45:037 - here is already suffice for some change.

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01:52:771 - You should remove this note, this is extra and conflicts with the music. It will also follow #1838688 this suggestion.

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01:52:771 removed

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02:07:192 (448) - change to k?

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02:10:939 (482,483) - ctrl+g here since 02:11:877 (483)'s sound is higher than 02:10:939 (482)

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02:58:752 (643) - It's not really clear what this is mapped to, as everything here is pretty overemphasized. Try this: https://puu.sh/GmnZF/777de0e21c.png

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https://puu.sh/GmpfT/5ab2435d13.png went for this cursor on 02:59:572 - to have don on every kickdrum

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03:03:205 (778,779,780,781) - there's only 1/4 sound here. so suggesting making it a 1/4 ddk

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Disagree, that's 1/6. It was probably 1/6 before (dddK) so please change it back. The sounds are the same with the ones at kiai.

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Reopened by frukoyurdakul

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03:09:533 - Move this to 03:09:416 - here in order to not skip the prominent kick sound. Afterwards, for filling the gap you can add a don at 03:09:767 - here maybe.

Same issue also exists at 03:16:798 - here.

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resolved but instead of adding don at 03:09:767 added kat and changed 03:10:002 (799) - to don

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same for 03:16:798

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03:10:822 (802,803) - You can swap these two in order to emphasize the snare hit properly.

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swapped

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03:18:556 - Consider deleting this, there is practically nothing to map here

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deleted also deleted 03:18:908 -

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03:26:525 - There is nothing here, please delet

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03:32:502 - is very long and complex, try cutting it to this for example: https://puu.sh/Gmo6i/cc61618dd6.png
788 being 03:32:267 -

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shortened according to suggestion

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03:35:076 - A finisher is required on this considering every other flam is represented with a finisher but this, and it has 1/2 gap with the next note already.

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changed to finisher for consistency

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03:38:127 (946) - can make it a finisher for the ending

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if accepted, delete 03:38:009 (946) would be better

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03:38:364 (1) - add a spinner, add a spinner because it fits at this point

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no change because i think that adding a spinner (where you mash notes) doesn't represent very well that there's no sounds in the foreground and it isn't a gradual fade out either

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