Kotonoha no Omoi (TV Size)

00:06:950 - perhaps change this note to d? The pitch of instrument is already weakened here, and feels similar to 00:07:345.

00:09:318 - perhaps change this to k d k to be consistent with 00:03:002 as they are the same?

00:12:969 - maybe try moving this note to 00:13:166? I think sound on white tick would deserve emphasis more as it is stronger than on the red tick, also music here is still weak to be covered as held sound.

00:14:252 - how about changing this to d as the pitch is lower than before and there is still no variation things going on at the start? Starting with simple pattern could be better to highlight the more complicated pattern on latter part.

00:21:554 - the note here and after this is somehow confusing on what it is emphasizing, I noticed that you mostly follow drums but sometimes you follow vocals. I recommend to make emphasis based on one of them, so there are two options.

1. 00:21:554 - change this note to d for giving emphasis to the high vocal at 00:21:752, or
2. 00:21:752 - change this note to d for the obvious low pitch drum sound.

As the pitch of both timestamps are different, being it drums or vocals, having different hitsound would be more appropriate.

00:22:541 - how about highlight the clap sound on this part? You covered the clap sounds on 00:24:515, so it could be more consistent on what you are following and there are no vocals to both timestamps that make the clap sounds outstanding imo. I recommend you to rearrange the pattern to emphasis the clap better.

1. 00:22:541 - change this to dkddk for covering drum sound more properly as pitch is high 00:22:640 and giving extra emphasis to the clap sound on 00:22:936 because the note before this is made to d,
2. 00:22:541 - change this to dkdkk for covering drum precisely while still emphasis to the clap sound.

Personally, I would suggest number 1 as it gives better flow while playing and the impact of emphasis feels stronger.

00:24:614 - perhaps change this to d for giving emphasis on clap sounds more properly? It is not held sound, so making this d would give emphasis on the clap sound more properly.

00:27:673 - similar sound exist on 00:27:870, so you may consider adding note here for a more natural play in my opinion.

00:34:778 to 00:37:541 - for spread's sake, consider buffing this part by emphasizing the drum and a bit more vocal by using 1/4 pattern here. At least, you did emphasize both of them on the remaining part of kiai so it could balance overall density in my opinion.

00:41:094 - perhaps change this note to k? The drum sound are noticeably high-pitched and you mostly cover them on many parts when the vocal is not strong, so it could be more intuitive while playing on what you are following.

00:42:081 - there is noticeable drum sound also vocal which is too prominent to skip based on what you are following, so it would be more appropriate to add note here preferably d as the drum pitch is low and can give emphasis to high vocal sound at 00:42:278.

00:42:279 - This note is a low tom and a lower vocal than 00:43:068 - , so consider making it a d instead

Not having notes on 00:47:804 - and 00:49:383 - feels off imo. You are following vocals mainly there, so it makes sense, but you are also ignoring a pretty noticeable note that goes on that 1/2 tick, so consider adding a note there to make a triple.

00:48:989 - the pattern starting here until 00:50:370 seems a bit confusing on what they are following. At first, it seems like following drums but suddenly following the synth and then the vocals, so it feels just like random hitsound placement because you don't really focus on each sound. I would recommend rearrange the pattern here to fit the music better. The pattern could be:

1. "k k ddk d k d D" to cover drum, vocal and synth sounds properly while avoiding awkward pattern.
2. "k d kdd k k d D" to focus on vocal and synth sounds, but feels a bit inconsistent as you are following drum mostly.

I would suggest the first option as the structure feels more consistent to the other parts and be more intuitive to hitsounding.

00:50:962 - you should consider adding note (preferably d for the drum pitch) here as there is obvious vocal and drum that you always follow. I think no reason ignoring this sound based on your concept.

00:54:121 (202,203) - consider swapping these two notes to show drum's pitch properly? Although there is synth sound that occurs here, you may instead make them same hitsound to separate it with the other instrument and not based on its pitch.