00:24:127 (24127|3,24361|3) - I feel that the jack pattern with the beats in this way in the lowest difficulty level is a bit difficult. How about making it easier to recognize by changing it to a different col?
01:23:730 (83730|2) - same goes to this one, this should be in 1/12, should be at 01:23:743 - instead
01:27:792 (87792|1) - same goes to this one, this should be in 1/12, should be at 01:27:805 - instead
01:29:277 (89277|2) - same goes to this one, this should be in 1/6, should be at 01:29:290 - instead
01:43:144 (103144|1) - for this one I think you can just change this note into 2 regular notes instead, no need to simplify the main melodies : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14157053/bf0a