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00:10:332 (10332|1) - move the note on lane 2 to 3? I think this sound should follow the previous anchor.

00:15:644 (15644|2) - I feel the ln here can be reduced to 1/2 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13923326/9b8d

00:20:175 and 02:00:175, I think there is no need to use LN for the 1/12 burst. This is my pattern -https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13922942/b1f6

00:20:175 - I reckon this sound should be emphasised with short LN - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14067848/e88a, or this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14067852/062f

00:20:175 (20175|2) - 개인적으로 이거 1col로 옮겼으면 좋겠네요 00:20:019 (20019|2,20175|2) - 굳이 이걸 이럴필요가있을까싶기도하고

00:36:425 - this sound is quite strong, I would recommend add more notes.

00:39:394 (39394|3,39472|2,39550|3) - 저게 3놋이 붙어있는게 의도적인건알지만 이거 3 4 3이 더좋을거같아요 굳이 모양새가 안이뻐도 되요

00:40:227 (40227|1,40227|2,40227|0,40332|0,40332|3,40332|1,40332|2) - 여기는 00:39:915 (39915|1,39915|6,39915|2,40019|0,40019|5,40019|3,40019|4) - 이거랑 다르게 잭으로 하셨네요 의도된게아니라면 바꾸도록합시다

00:40:957 (40957|0,41425|6,41894|1,42675|6,44394|0,45957|6,46425|0,46894|5,47675|0,51894|1,56894|5) - I felt these normal notes can be turned into short lns to create shield which adds stronger impact to the important sounds in this section - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14067867/884e

00:50:644 (50644|5,50644|2,50644|1,50722|3) - these notes can be turned into short lns to match these 00:50:644 (50644|1,50644|2,50644|5,50722|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14067871/c004

01:02:207 - I think for the heart rate monitor sound that happens throughout this section, I think you can do reverse shields for all the sound for the emphasis, it will maximize the emphasis for that sound in my opinion. something like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14145010/ff72

01:29:746 (89746|0) - I feel there is no need to make this LN grace, but it is fine to keep it this way.

01:40:957 - ~ 01:50:957 - 여기구간 막난치고는 너무 노트가 적어요 롱놋을써가면서 채우는게 좋다고봅니다

02:00:644 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13923348/9315 - my take on how to rearrange the roll pattern here.

02:01:269 (121269|2) - I think it is better to remove the short LN here as the snare is more noticeable. You can, however, change this 02:01:425 (121425|2) - to short LN - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14067887/e85a

02:02:441 (122441|5) - this LN length maybe can reduce to 02:02:832 - to match 02:01:816 (121816|1,122050|0) -

02:02:832 (122832|3) - the space note can be turned into 1/2 LN to create release stair pattern? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13923372/0ec2

02:03:691 (123691|5) - I suggest extend this LN by 1/4 beat and also adapt the previous short LN idea - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14067890/c620

same with this 02:07:441 (127441|1) -

02:13:769 (133769|4) - this note can be turned into LN? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13923390/d57c - following this pattern 02:11:269.

02:20:800 (140800|1,140839|2,140878|3,140917|4) - These can be turned into short lns as well I feel.

02:20:800 - Probably be able to add one more note at lane 1 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14067896/1e56

02:20:957 (140957|5) - 이거 롱놋으로해서 02:20:957 (140957|5) - 여기까지올려주시면 더 좋을거같네요