00:01:272 (2,3,4) - These vocals are of similar intensity, yet they are mapped differently. Since it's a calm part I'd make 2-3 into a 1/1 slider.
Same with 00:10:647 (2,3,4), furthermore 00:11:397 (4) - ends on the downbeat which in this section is a louder guitar strum, but it's still a louder sound. I'd encourage mapping it actively as a result.
00:12:897 (3,1) - 1 is a pretty loud vocal so it should be emphasized. This is unless of course you're mapping with DS, which you don't seem to be looking at the kiai.
00:24:897 (3) - I'd make this a 2 circle stack to emphasize 00:25:272 (1) - which marks the start of a new section of the music, where some drums are introduced.
00:54:334 (3,4,5,6,7) - Dense rhythm not backed by vocals. I would suggest making a triple out of 3-4 because there's a clear snare in between, then make 2 1/2 sliders. In this way, you would more accurately represent the idea that you want to emphasize vocals in the map, by mapping more passive rhythm for sections without vocals.
01:07:647 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Since there are loud impacts on each 1, they could be spaced rather than stacked, while 2 and 3 can remain stacked. Therefore, you would end up with something like what you did at 01:10:084 (3,1).
01:25:272 (1) - Similar to other points I've mentioned, I wouldn't stack this because it doesn't provide proper emphasis to the cymbal
01:26:022 (4,5,6) - spacing on 4-5 is bigger while 5-6 is a stack, yet the latter pair are stronger sounds (vocals). Should probably fix emphasis accordingly
01:29:584 (6) - Right now you're ignoring this really loud cymbal for the sake of following the vocals. This slider should be shortened to 3/2 so that you can place a circle at it's current position. Then, move the slider 1/2 a beat down so that it lands on the cymbal.
01:34:834 (2,3,4,5) - personally think a circle followed by 2 1/2 sliders fits the vocals better here since they are getting softer
yeah these should be 1/3 like before, guess it's harder to tell since the vocal is overpowering here
Actually, the 1/3rds in this section follow the horn parts there and there aren't any horn parts in this specific part, just snare rolls, so I made the repeat sliders 1/4 repeats to represent the snare rolls here. The 1/4 sliders were a bit off as said by IcEvolution so I went a head and snapped them back in place. Thanks though!
01:53:022 (3) - imo 3/4 sounds are more important here so would recommend making a 3/4 slider like 01:48:522 (3) -