All of your walks are at 1.2x, which are pretty uncomfortable, espeically something like 00:11:525 (1,2,3) - looks like double dash tbh. If you don't really like 1x then I would suggest 1.1x instead.
01:06:738 (4) - 01:07:695 (6) - 01:08:972 (2,3) - seem to be missing hitsounds, notably claps
00:15:355 (4) - 00:35:621 (4) - 00:45:993 (5) - 01:03:547 (5) - NCs to keep combo length down pls