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Breeze - La Plage

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Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 20 ноября 2011 г. at 4:00:23

Artist: Breeze
Title: La Plage
Tags: Lenor kanpakyin spboxer3 Reiji-RJ
BPM: 92,5
Filesize: 4569kb
Play Time: 03:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (4,86 stars, 479 notes)
  2. Beginner (1,23 stars, 148 notes)
  3. Middling (2,95 stars, 215 notes)
  4. Taiko (4,43 stars, 537 notes)
Download: Breeze - La Plage
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Beginner by Reiji-RJ
Middling by kanpakyin
Taiko by spboxer3
Last edited by Louis Cyphre , edited 15 times in total.
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
:arrow:
Aleksart
616 posts
Joined January 2011
Aleksart
Офигенная песня, бля буду) Как слышу её, то какую то другую песню мне напоминает, не могу ток название вспомнить... ><
Хард офигенный, молодца, Луис)
Бля, кудосу на звезду нету ><
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
Sorry for delay,here we go!

Please don't care the star rating,it was a really easy diff.

Download: Breeze - La Plage (Louis Cyphre) [Kanpakyin's Easy].osu
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
Download: Breeze - La Plage (Louis Cyphre) [Taiko muzukashii].osu
Here is my first muzukashii :3
Hope you like my style ;)
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Tony
It was him instrumental~ really nice! good luck :3
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
I'd say La Plage with vocal <:
Mastodonio
1,120 posts
Joined October 2009
Mastodonio
THE GAME
zeroclover
468 posts
Joined December 2010
zeroclover
hi, come for play and mod 8-)

Advance
nice beatmap, i only can mod a little >:(

(minus) : too many sliders, hard to get 100% acc (for mouse user like me :P )
add some whistle sounds at beginning, (just like Middling diff)
(my suggestion) :
01:30:868 - im using this combo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168115 its look fine
01:00:868 - 01:02:166 - i think need spinner here ( bcause , its look fine :D )

Middling
im not pro mod normal diff(2.91)
but its look fine when i played with dt
no error on AiMod too


my play result :D
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168090
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/168092
Aleksart
616 posts
Joined January 2011
Aleksart
Стар, как и хотел :3
Ну и попозже попробую помодить песню, хотя , врядли что найду, т.к. ты супер маппер :)
Aleksart
616 posts
Joined January 2011
Aleksart
Beginner
Очень понравилось, непривычно тока как расставлено всё, но в целом неплохо.
Придраться не к чему(
03:38:166 (1) - финиш, какой там использовался то... N:C1 (40%)

Middling
General: Circle Size -1 and HD +1,AR +1,OD +1

00:25:517 - add whistle
00:25:841 (4) - remove whistle
00:26:166 - add whistle
00:31:679 - remove whistle
00:32:004 - add whistle
00:33:949 - add
00:34:274 - remove
00:34:598 - add
00:46:274 - ^
00:46:598 - remove
00:46:922 - add
00:47:571 - add or remove
00:48:868 - add
00:49:517 - ^
00:49:517 - ^
00:52:112 (3) - add
00:52:112 (3,4) - ^
00:53:085 - ^
00:55:679 - add
00:56:977 - ^
00:57:949 - ^
01:55:031 (2) - remove clap and add finish
Дальше ритм какой то странный идёт.. мне не нравится :(
02:53:409 (3) - ^
03:38:166 (2) - add finish N:C1 (40%)

Ух.. надоело)
Старку я поствавил... Пожалуй тока в фавориты осталось записаться :D
Advanced - просто круто :)
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
554 posts
Joined March 2010
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
In general
Now the Mp3 should cut < 3:30? Your Mp3 last 3:56 is no problem?
03:18:706 ~ end why don't you not use KIMI time?

Beginner
No Problem

Middling
02:26:841(2) - change finish
03:04:436(3) - too far from(2).the distance between (1) and (2) is rigth

Advanced
01:52:598(2)~(3) - make it in a stright line
02:07:355(2) - New Combol
02:38:166(6) - one grid left

Good job.Matual map skill with beautiful song.Star
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Tony
hey there :3 here's mah awesome mod! (suggestions)

[Beginner]

Can you tell me if the distances are consistant in this diff? I see many differences of distancing~ from 1.0x to 1.5x. I'm not sure if it's allowed or not :S
00:45:625 (4) - try vertical flip like here (Nazi, but it looks better :D)
00:56:004 (4) - a bit ugly underlap (Nazi)


[Middling]

Try AR4. It plays better I think
01:05:085 (x) - add a note here! It feels empty
01:41:733 (x) - ^
02:17:409 (x) - ^
02:44:004 (x) - ^
03:17:733 (5) - move this 1/2 later. It fits better :P
03:24:868 (x) - add a note here and here 03:25:193(x) -

[Advanced]

Just perfect :3 I like how does it sound this 1/8 slider 01:03:625 (4) - everywhere!


Awesomest beatmap of all times! expect some kd stars from me in this weekend!
- Rche -
382 posts
Joined May 2010
- Rche -
[Advanced]
those overlapping sliders look bad in my eyes...maybe just mine.
01:13:193 (1,2) and 01:14:490 (1,2) - they really look bad.
01:56:328 (1) - remove hitsound at the end?
02:09:301 (1) - why new combo?
02:45:788 (1,2) - i think the new combo should be at (2)
02:47:896 (4) - new combo?

[Middling]
01:55:355 (1,2) - i think the new combo should be at (2)
02:00:544 (5,1) - i think the new combo should be at (5)
02:17:733 (4) - new combo?
03:34:598 (5) - ^

that's all.
double star.
(runs away)
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006
hello~~


Some Suggestions
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Beginner

00:39:139 (1,2) - need out more space like you did 00:57:301 (1,2,3) - 1.20x
00:44:328 (3,4) - not look good slider blanket try make same like 00:41:733 (1,2)
00:46:922 (1,2,3,4) - random spacing why? try same spacing like you did 00:46:922 (1,2,3,4)
01:25:517 (2,3) - I can see still incosiente spacing

you spacing all are kindy incosiente like Tony said i suggest you start active Distance Snap and make consistant pleasse
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Middling

AR +1 most better play IMO

00:56:328 (1) - remove new combo and at 00:57:301 (2) - put new combo
01:41:409 (3,1) - i have worried this stack because bpm is low then will be hard play and read hard overlaps, will be better unstack IMO
02:03:463 (4,1) - Same thing ^
02:04:112 (1) - Remove new combo
02:17:085 (3,4) - same 01:41:409 (3,1)
02:43:679 (3,1) - ^
03:36:868 (6) - put new combo and at 03:37:517 (1) - remove new combo
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Advanced

everthing look good
/me feel song and fly *-* Omg I can fly (dream orz)
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that all i think
and good luck and star
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
Just fixed a few thing.

Download: Breeze - La Plage (Louis Cyphre) [Middling].osu
Last edited by kanpakyin , edited 1 time in total.
Reiji-RJ
1,402 posts
Joined April 2010
Reiji-RJ
Most fixed, thanks :3

Download: Breeze - La Plage (Louis Cyphre) [Beginner].osu
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
Updated. Thanks everyone for modding
S h i o n
1,053 posts
Joined July 2010
S h i o n
:) Hi,Louis Cyphre

General
  1. [EDIT] Offset 20969ms (-8) is better to me
Beginner
  1. 01:17:409 (4) - Make end tick to 97,133 ?
  2. 02:53:733 (3,1) - Replace them with slider or at least use such 2 notes after such rythem has appeared once. (I mean if you can try slider+slider and slider + 2notes , that's much easier than what it looks like.)

Middling
  1. 02:19:679 (1) - Finish on head
  2. 02:41:085 (4) - Try this and just let it look better ? 
    220,230,161085,2,0,B|240:159|192:114,1,110,8|8
  3. 02:54:706 (1) - A little ugly :x
  4. 03:25:193 (x) - Need one note ?

Advanced
  1. 01:25:193 (3) - Finish on head
  2. 03:17:409 (1) - maybe put this around 03:16:761 (1) to have much fun xD
  3. 03:19:031 (3) - Make end tick to 476,164 for a better flow
  4. 03:24:220 (5) - Make end tick to 256,352 according to (2,3)

I am have completely lost myself in music and playing this diff. Perfectly nice to me !!
Another nice song & much enjoyable mapset~

I am looking forward to its rank...
Last edited by S h i o n , edited 2 times in total.
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
Hey

[Beginner]
  1. Nothing special to mention about this diff, tbh.. Mostly I can say I'd like to see more effort on hitsounds in the beginning of the map, but I guess that's due to the song being really quiet in that part.
[Middling]
  1. 01:05:085 (x) - add a note here? (or extend the previous slider)
  2. 01:18:058 (1) - unless it was on purpose.. make it symmetrical?
  3. 01:36:220 (5) - doesn't sound really good imo >< instead, you could make it like this: http://puu.sh/8omK but it's up to you
  4. 02:34:598 - unecessary timing section
  5. 02:35:247 - ^
  6. 03:23:895 (4) - same of 01:18:058 (1)
[Advanced]
  1. 02:08:490 (x) - add a note here?
  2. 02:13:193 (1) - consider removing nc
    Well.. Overall I think you could use more the taiko hitsounds you used in the beginning of the map, aand you should use the same combo colours that were used in other diffs >_> They look better, imo
That's all~ Hope the mod was helpful, and good luck on ranks <3
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