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JAM Project - Ryuusei Lovers (TV Size) [Taiko|Osu]

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Sagisawa-Yukari
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Sagisawa-Yukari
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年1月31日 at 1:04:08

Artist: JAM Project
Title: Ryuusei Lovers (TV Size)
Source: Super Robot Wars OG2 -The Inspector-
Tags: SRW ryuusei Deen AoiX xykbear yelfea026 Sagisawa-Yukari -[NYAN]- Rotte kiddly
BPM: 155
Filesize: 9418kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Aoiko (4.83 stars, 385 notes)
  2. Easy (2.58 stars, 78 notes)
  3. ExTrA Collab (5 stars, 326 notes)
  4. Hard (4.94 stars, 221 notes)
  5. Normal (4.11 stars, 112 notes)
  6. Rotte's Insane (5 stars, 228 notes)
Download: JAM Project - Ryuusei Lovers (TV Size)
Download: JAM Project - Ryuusei Lovers (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first map
Easy done by me
Normal done by me
Hard done by me
Aoiko (Taiko diff) done by AoiX
Rotte's Insane done by Rotte
ExTrA Collab done by DeeN and kiddly
If you download in 18:29 19/1/2013 before
Redownload plz
special thanks
DeeN,kiddly (Guest diff)
AoiX (Guest diff and compress video)
Nymph,Megurine Luka,kyuten,wmfchris,popner,Snowy Dream,BakaHuang,spboxer3,Numbers 596108,Kert,JauiPlaY,cmn_891127,Midasmens,wantuole,Heatherfield,sherrie__fay,Flower- t e n n y a-,Reisen Udongein,Athena Tennos,Pokie,Scorpiour,lkx_shore,Mythol,Rotte,Frostmourne,Flask,Strawberry(Modding)
Leorda (bubbled)
minyeob (ranked)
hope you enjoy it :3
Last edited by Sagisawa-Yukari , edited 103 times in total.
lzy
183 posts
Joined July 2009
lzy
good
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
[Insane]
00:21:802(5,6,7)-(5,6)与(6,7)之间距离相等 但是音乐时间间隔却不等 又因为是一种颜色的note 所以要调整距离 不然会误按
00:24:125(5,1)-与00:21:222(6,1)-感觉之间的间隔最好保持一致?
00:24:318(1,2,3)-1到2的距离和2到3要相同
00:27:415~00:31:867-这段明显间距变小 不是说是insane距离就可以随便调了..作为刚尝试做图的新手我建议先试着整张图用一个ds做
后面基本上都是这个问题

先搞好距离问题再教你排版 :roll:
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

BakaHuang wrote:

[Insane]
00:21:802(5,6,7)-(5,6)与(6,7)之间距离相等 但是音乐时间间隔却不等 又因为是一种颜色的note 所以要调整距离 不然会误按
00:24:125(5,1)-与00:21:222(6,1)-感觉之间的间隔最好保持一致?
00:24:318(1,2,3)-1到2的距离和2到3要相同
00:27:415~00:31:867-这段明显间距变小 不是说是insane距离就可以随便调了..作为刚尝试做图的新手我建议先试着整张图用一个ds做
后面基本上都是这个问题

先搞好距离问题再教你排版 :roll:
谢阿黄，我觉得我还是先重做的好。。
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
囧queue里看见了 不过我现在电脑有问题……mod困难 以后如果再需要mod直接游戏里喊我吧
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

Nymph wrote:

囧queue里看见了 不过我现在电脑有问题……mod困难 以后如果再需要mod直接游戏里喊我吧
恩~多谢了
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
先占位._.

毛夫人真是没有人性:3
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
路过
kyuten
171 posts
Joined August 2008
kyuten
0w0/
[General]
BG的分辨率改为1024*768或800*600
PreviewTime没有设定（所有难度都要统一哦
好像需要full submit一下..我没有下到video._.
kiai不统一
tag和source什么的就不看啦...不了解这个系列...


[Easy]
调整过offset？所有note都需要resnap一下的样子
-Beatmap-
00:21:608 (1,2) - 建议结束在白线上..毕竟是Easy难度...（后面也有..考虑一下ww
00:40:189 (2) - 这里一定要改的吧...和节奏对不上..
00:41:737 (2) - ^
00:45:802 (1) - 和音乐好像对不上
00:47:931 (4) - 白线
....后面都是...全都在白线上吧Orz...

[Normal]
-Beatmap-
00:33:414 (1,2) - timing重合了...
00:41:737 (2) - 怪异的节奏...
00:46:769 (2,1) - ....
00:58:189 (1) - 怪异的节奏...
后面没看了...应该是哪里出了问题...节奏都没有对好的样子...

[Hard]
-Beatmap-
01:09:221 (1) - 这个是要放在中间的吧0.0
其他还好w再排对称整齐一些w


[ExTrA]
-Beatmap-
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4) - 换成repeat吧...
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 1/3虽然也不错，不过和前面1/4排成一样的不容易读出来.换一下排列？
Others are all fine~

[Insane]
-Beatmap-
00:55:286 (2,3,4,5) - 重新排列一下吧...

需要map的地方还很多啊...节奏蛮好~不过排列还是要改一改ww
加油~☆
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
/from Irc ReQ

[General]

BG需要1024*768的大小
需要设定preview time，具体方法，每个难度将时间轴停在某个副歌开始的点上，Timing下拉菜单最后一项点一下即可。所有难度preview time必须一致
所有难度的kiai time保持一致:< Hard的kiai结束时间有点不一样，其他的没查你自己看一下吧
tag里加上Aoi的曾用名

[Easy]

00:18:901 (1) - 结束在00:19:288
00:21:608 (1,2) - ^
00:24:318 (1,2) - ^
00:27:414 (1,3) - ^后面都不说了:< EZ尽量不要压红线，而且EZ对spacing的要求很高，建议全程开着distance snapping 调整间距

[Normal]

NM对distance的要求基本和EASY一样，spacing问题很多比如00:21:608 (1) - 这个:<
同样建议全程开distance spacing调整，我下面只讲节奏的地方:<不提Spacing

00:20:447 (3) - 减少一个来回
00:33:414 (1) - 少一个来回，两个slider重叠了，这里开始vocal不好跟，我建议你干脆直接下简单的1/2节奏..现在这样非常混乱:<
00:34:769 (3,4,5) - NM里不建议三连
00:41:737 (2) - 这个这样 http://puu.sh/pS6X
00:42:705 (1) - 这个也稍微拉长一点 从 00:42:898开始 http://puu.sh/pS7f

额后面的还是不看了，我估计你改过了sv所以很多slider都重叠了:<我给了你建议也是不针对你原谱的，赶紧调整一下

[Hard]

我建议SV1.6，不过这样所有slider都要重新调整:<
音效太稀薄了

00:32:060 (1) - spacing
00:32:060 (1,2,3,4) - 要么全加一个折返...要么就不要这么放...略怪
01:06:898 (4) - 调整下形状
01:11:931 (1) - 和前面的slider拉开一点
01:14:640 (4) - ^
01:16:189 (5) - 下移一些

[Insane]

音效依然太稀薄
和Hard感觉不出难度差距
I的sv还用1.5这相当不科学啊

00:21:996 (3) - spacing
00:23:157 (1) - 拉远
00:24:899 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这一块spaicng都不等距
00:32:060 (1,2,3,4) - 同hard
00:38:835 (2) - spacing
00:48:318 (1) - 和上一个note拉开距离
00:51:028 (1) - spacing
00:55:286 (2,3,4,5) - 和之前一样，后面不说了
00:59:931 (3) - 把尾巴对准2
01:04:189 (3,4,5) - 右移两格

[Extra]

00:36:318 (x) - 少了点什么的感觉，加个circle吧
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然超级帅超级帅超级帅，但是严重怀疑会被挑刺
01:20:060 (12) - NC吧

毛夫人鬼畜最后还用1/3
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
Taiko mod

[Taiko]
- [Aoiko]這名字可能會被吐嘈 至少我看了十秒才找到taiko diff
- Taiko BG不見了/連接失效 再加一次以後full submit

不錯 不用吐嘈了

no kd
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
Taiko mod... : O 今天第4張tama了？

[Taiko]
鼓聲太小了 嗯
00:12:683 - 音樂來說比較像 kkddd/kkkkd
00:23:468 - vocal高到低音 可試kddkd
00:55:232 - 音樂是單一鼓聲吧 <_<
00:57:780 ~ 01:08:957 - 道一堆串串與慢悠悠的歌曲完全不符吧
01:08:172 - vocal發生在white tick, kkkdk說不過去, 放kkkkd
01:10:329 - overmap

實在也沒必要特地去弄難一個taiko diff
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod... : O 今天第4張tama了？

[Taiko]
鼓聲太小了 嗯
00:12:683 - 音樂來說比較像 kkddd/kkkkd
00:23:468 - vocal高到低音 可試kddkd
00:55:232 - 音樂是單一鼓聲吧 <_<
00:57:780 ~ 01:08:957 - 道一堆串串與慢悠悠的歌曲完全不符吧
01:08:172 - vocal發生在white tick, kkkdk說不過去, 放kkkkd
01:10:329 - overmap

實在也沒必要特地去弄難一個taiko diff
3Q~我会快速联系作者看看
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
貼錯地方 嗚嗚嗚 我過一會再來remod
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
Taiko mod

[Aoiko]
我個人覺得diff name還可以 不過還真認不出這是taiko diff

00:16:577 - 可考慮把這spinner弄小聲一點
00:26:641 - 不算是重音吧 remove finish
00:39:318 - 建議加個note？ 這樣又可以沿用3/4又能跟vocal
01:03:415 - D
01:25:867 - d---k d k d k d k d k (spinner ---

ddddd5連的那些用的不錯
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
Jam Project - Meteor Lovers(TV Size)
改成(加个空格)
Jam Project - Meteor Lovers (TV Size)
不然是不能rank的。
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

popner wrote:

Jam Project - Meteor Lovers(TV Size)
改成(加个空格)
Jam Project - Meteor Lovers (TV Size)
不然是不能rank的。

OK，谢谢提醒
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
DeeN
ok party time

kyuten wrote:

[ExTrA]
-Beatmap-
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4) - 换成repeat吧... nope
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 1/3虽然也不错，不过和前面1/4排成一样的不容易读出来.换一下排列？changed
Others are all fine~
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
DeeN
FIRE FIRE!

Megurine Luka wrote:

[Extra]
00:36:318 (x) - 少了点什么的感觉，加个circle吧 yep
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然超级帅超级帅超级帅，但是严重怀疑会被挑刺 nope
01:20:060 (12) - NC吧 yep

毛夫人鬼畜最后还用1/3
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
DeeN
welcome to my world

Download: Jam Project - Meteor Lovers(TV Size) (Sagisawa-Yukari) [ExTrA].osu
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

DeeN wrote:

welcome to my world
收到！
kyuten
171 posts
Joined August 2008
kyuten
又来了(／・ω・)／にゃー！

[General]
怎么每个难度的offset都不一样OAO???

[Normal]
-Beatmap-
00:31:769 ~ 00:33:124 - 这中间应该可以map点什么..normal的话
00:33:221 (1) - 这个节奏不对..按照歌词的话是1/4拍的
00:35:543 (6,7) - 前面有3个的stack了这里的2个可能会有些不舒服
00:48:317 - 缺一个note的样子....
00:54:898 (1) - remove NC
00:58:189 (1) - 和spin的连接可能有些太紧凑了...
01:05:931 (1) - 歌词是在这里..不过感觉在白线上会善良一些...


[Hard]
-Beatmap-
00:32:058 - add a note
00:32:058 (1) - spin移动到00:32:155 - 这里开始
00:38:252 (1) - end here 00:39:413
00:48:316 - 同样少了一个note的样子...
00:49:091 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这里节奏和打击感好像不是很好...稍微remap一下？
00:58:187 (1) - 这个.....


[Insane]
-Beatmap-
00:20:447 (3,4) - 节奏好像有些紧/怪
00:25:093 (4,5,6,7,8) - 排列有些单一加上这个stack...试试看stream？
00:27:415 (1,2,3) - 不建议用1/4...有些突然...?
00:31:673 (4) - 同Hard
00:44:544 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 这个太突然...或者有些怪异..
00:52:093 (4) - 好好摆呀ww


[ExTrA]
00:30:318 (1,1,2) - 试一下其他节奏呢0 0?也许能找到更好的ww
嗯......应该是蛮好ww不过有些梗不知道会不会被吐槽...╮(￣▽￣")╭


[Overall]
Insane的分配不均匀...前面有蛮多连打后面高潮那里反而少了...多用用stream可能更好一些？
音效还没加的样子0 0...
大概就这些ww加油ww
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]

音效还没有加嘛....0.0 记得加音效喔..

  1. combo颜色最好要统一 .-. (至于为什么.....原因很复杂)
    - [Easy] :
    Combo1 : 0,0,255
    Combo2 : 255,26,26
    - [ExTrA] :
    Combo1 : 255,0,128
    Combo2 : 255,26,26
    Combo3 : 0,0,255
    Combo4 : 255,128,0
    - [Hard] :
    Combo1 : 0,0,255
    Combo2 : 255,26,26
    - [Insane] :
    Combo1 : 0,0,255
    Combo2 : 255,26,26
    - [Normal] :
    Combo1 : 0,0,255
    Combo2 : 255,26,26
  2. 时间预览点要统一 就那跟黄色线 效果就是点一下歌就会放出的预览音乐(至于为什么....）
    - [Aoiko] : 58189
    - [Easy] : 58200
    - [ExTrA] : 58286
    - [Hard] : 58187
    - [Insane] : 58189
    - [Normal] : 58189
  3. LetterBox (就那个休息时上下会出现黑框的那个) 最好统一全用相同的 （至于为什么...orz)
    - [Aoiko] : 0
    - [Easy] : 1
    - [ExTrA] : 1
    - [Hard] : 1
    - [Insane] : 1
    - [Normal] : 1
  4. kiai要统一 (这个略重要）这里都是一些细微误差..不过之后肯定会有人挑刺...趁早改.
    - [Aoiko] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:770, ends on 01:27:802
    - [Easy] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:767, ends on 01:27:802
    - [ExTrA] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:770, ends on 01:24:318
    - [Hard] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:770, ends on 01:27:800
    - [Insane] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:769, ends on 01:27:807
    - [Normal] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 01:10:769, ends on 01:27:802
[Easy]
AR-1 OD-1 Easy不建议使用略高的...
00:19:673 (2) - finish
00:45:996 (1) - 开头finish
00:54:899 (1) - 我感觉这个不用刻意newcombo remove掉
01:10:770 (1) - finish
01:26:254 (1) - finish


[Normal]
00:19:673 (1) - finish
00:30:512 (1) - 移动到x:300 y:52 试试 没有和前面的slider有重叠个人感觉会好点
00:32:060 (1) - 可能这个太短不过貌似不要紧
00:45:996 - finish
00:49:093 (1) - spacing一点点偏差
00:55:286 (1) - 在这里结束00:57:609
01:05:931 (1) - 建议这里放个circle 01:06:125 ←slider从这里放
01:10:770 (1) - finish
01:21:609 (2) - 这里直接开始slider


[Hard]
00:31:673 (4) - 与00:30:899 (2)分开好看点
00:36:802 (3) - delete
00:54:899 (1) - 我感觉这个不用刻意newcombo remove掉
00:56:835 (1) - 00:57:609 这里结束即可
01:12:318 (5) - 鼠标往下拖一点..和(4)分开差不多为止


[Insane]
00:19:286 (3) - spacing
00:28:964 (1) - 建议和(6)分开
00:52:673 (6) - 这个note应该在后面的红tick上也就是这里00:52:770
00:54:899 (1) - 我感觉这个不用刻意newcombo remove掉
01:26:641 (4) - 建议分开..

[ExTrA]
嗯...好像只有这个难度有音效..
00:18:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个感觉没声音很不舒服....
00:37:867 (7) - 去掉clap
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - 哇这里有点恐怖....
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Great Mapset
嗯不错 再多要点mod..
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
Easy&Normal&Hard

这三个难度不加音效了吗

Insane

00:19:093(2,4)-add whis
00:20:447(3)-slider头上加clap 折点加whis
00:21:028(4)-add whis
音效多加点 老样子2 4白线上加clap 前段适当加点whistle kiai部分也是

ExTrA

00:18:899(1,2,3,4,5,6)-太轻了 打上去不舒服 或者你换成2个1/4的slider吧
我觉得这样排比较好 http://puu.sh/HDpO
00:22:286(6,7)-和(5)重叠 打起来比较舒服
00:24:706(4,5,1,2,3)- http://puu.sh/HDsU 这样摆比较好? (1)取消NC
00:25:673(4)-NC 如果你按照上面的改了..那这个就往上放 排版你随意 http://puu.sh/HDuR
00:32:931(4,5,6,7,8,9,10)- http://puu.sh/HDxJ 这样放比较好看？
00:34:383(2,4)- http://puu.sh/HDyo
后面部分他妈谁做的那么鬼畜
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Easy]
一直横竖感觉排的比较随意，最好再多花一些时间在Easy的排列上。
00:19:673 (2,3) - 太近了，Easy里要全程保持固定距离

[Normal]
Kiai开始时间检查一下
00:18:899 (1,2,1,2) - 做对称？
00:21:609 (1) - 怎么突然变成soft的音效了？
00:29:738 (3,1) - 压到了不太好看
00:33:222 (1) - Normal里不要放蓝线节奏
00:58:189 (1,1) - ^

[Hard]
00:29:351 (2,1) - 叠一起？
00:45:802 (1) - 离前面转盘有些近，考虑早点结束转盘或把这几个note移到靠中间的位置
01:04:189 (3,1) - 叠一起？
01:26:254 (1) - 结尾soft

[Insane]
00:23:931 (8,9,1) - 这三个往前移1/2的话节奏就一致了
00:30:512 (1) - ^
01:01:286 (1,2,3) - nazi - 间距不相等
01:04:189 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:13:286 - 我的建议是Kiai段里不要有这种留空，会降低节奏的连续性
01:15:028 - ^ 以及其他一些地方

[ExTrA]
00:19:673 (1) - nazi - 往上移一格
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4) - 比较危险，因为滑条没有自动偏移
01:27:899 (1) - 结尾soft

GL~
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
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※ 注意

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改
藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. [Normal] : 00:24:706 有多餘的綠線
  2. [Insane] : 00:20:060 & 00:26:254 有多餘的綠線
  3. [ExTrA] : 00:40:189 缺NC

    AIBat v3.0 wrote:

    Snapping
    01:26:254 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    01:26:512 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    01:26:770 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    01:27:028 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    01:27:286 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    01:27:544 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    ExTrA的HP為什麼比Insane來的低... 應該要改...

Aoiko


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 影片從Taiko中移除吧~
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

  1. 00:16:577 (1) - spinner end at 00:18:706 -
  2. 00:18:947 (1,1,1,1) - ↓ I think this is correct rhythm
  3. 00:21:415 (2,3,4,5,1) - ddkdd sound better then ddddk
  4. 00:24:318 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - u used ddddk k. I think ddddkkd it's more fit for this part
  5. 00:27:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2) - 給個示範的節奏 ddddk d dkd k kkd. 大致上參考一下這個 如果這樣擺的話00:28:964 (2) - 就不能用finish了
  6. 00:29:157 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - ddk ddd ddk/ddk kkd ddk? 單純用兩個ddd會感覺有些無趣 而且 這樣確實是合音樂的
  7. 00:31:093 - add note
  8. 00:41:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 這串排法感覺沒什麼變化 有些音可以突顯出來的並沒有突顯出來 看你怎麼改吧 我的話應該會選擇kkd d kkddk
  9. 00:44:447 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - kdddd kdd dk 然後00:45:609 - 到00:45:996 - 用1/6拍吧 節奏上比較符合 ((如果改了記得finish的地方要改掉
  10. 00:51:222 (7,8) - if you want use the 2 plat pattern for here. you should add note at 00:51:512 - . It's more suit for the pattern
  11. 00:54:318 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - try to used kkddddk?
  12. 00:55:286 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 呃...你用了這樣子的排法說實話我覺沒有很合適 因為這背景音樂是3連的節拍...
  13. 01:07:673 (1,2,3,4,5) - ddddk/ddkdk
  14. 01:21:802 (1) - k?
  15. 01:27:028 (1,1,1,1) - 這邊其實做連打比較適合...


反正大概就這樣摟~ 加油吧 Taiko多找些人來看看會對你有幫助的~ ;)
good luck
AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
AoiX
更改无力，不改了233
把影片去掉吧，记得是在代码里改
下班~~下班~~
Numbers 596108
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2011
773 posts
Joined November 2009
Numbers 596108
Simply Mod - Mod Request from Random Mod

  • Aoiko
  1. Timing -

    00:16:577 - 155.00 BPM : Sound Volume 80~100%
    00:18:706 - 1.0x : Remove
    00:33:318 - 1.0x : Remove
    00:44:447 - 1.0x : Remove
    00:45:802 - 1.0x : Remove

  2. Notes -

    00:21:706 (5) - Remove
    00:21:996 (2) -     o
    00:24:609 (4) - o
    00:24:706 (1,2) - OO
    00:25:093 - Add a o
    00:25:189 - Add a o
    00:25:480 (1,1) - OO
    00:33:415 (1,2) - Remove
    00:45:802 (1) - O
    00:47:544 (1,1,1) - ooo
    00:56:835 (1,2,3,4) - Remove and edit some long stream :/
    01:20:060 (1) - o
大致上這樣,簡易的Mod,不好意思囉~>A<
姐姐加油~♪
Reisen Udongein
Former osu! Champion: OWC#3
1,073 posts
Joined January 2010
Reisen Udongein
Hello~ from my queue :3 Sorry for late :(

[General]

Try offset 16,583?

also , how about finding new 192kbps mp3? 128 is little bit low :(

add some appropriate combo colours like 'ExTrA' diff? only Red / Blue is too simple in my opinion.

[Easy]

lack of hitsounds??? at least you should add some claps on 2 , 4 white lines and add finishes when cymbals' sounds exist.

00:16:577 (1,1) - this is too short for the beginners. how about delete slider and extend the spnner to 00:18:899 - ?
and 00:19:673 (1) - add new combo here for not being new combo bugged.
00:20:060 (2) - delete finish
00:54:899 (5) - delete this note since the beginners have slow response.
00:55:286 (1) - shorten this spinner to 00:56:835 - since it's too hard.
01:08:060 (1) - shorten this spinner to 01:09:996 - . same reason as above.
01:19:673 (3) - NC
01:23:157 (1) - extend this spinner to 01:27:802 -
01:25:480 (1,2,1) - and remove these

[Normal]

same suggestion as easy diff. you should add appropriate hitsounds. so lack of hitsounds here too

HP + 1
AR + 1

00:19:673 (1) - add finish
00:32:060 (1) - extend this spinner to 00:33:609 -
00:33:222 (1) - and remove this and 00:33:996 (2) - NC for not being bugged
01:07:673 (1,1) - make these spinners to 1 spinner and end at 01:09:996 -

[Hard]

Same suggestion as easy diff

00:34:964 (6) - NC
00:47:157 (7) - ^
00:53:738 (5) - ^
00:55:286 (1,1) - make these spinners to 1 spinner and end at 00:57:996 -
00:58:189 (1) - and delete this slider , and add a note at 00:58:383 -
01:19:286 (5) - ^

[Aoiko]

why only this diff has different setting of combo colours and 'letterbox during break' ? i think you need to set it like another diffs

[Insane]

Same suggestion as easy diff

00:32:060 (1) - extend to 00:33:222 -
00:35:157 (9) - NC
00:44:447 (8) - ^
00:47:544 (9) - ^
00:48:318 (1) - DNC
00:50:641 (7) - NC
00:53:738 (9) - ^
01:19:286 (8) - ^
01:27:028 (5) - ^

[ExTrA]

HP + 1

00:21:028 (1) - DNC
00:31:673 (2) - NC as you did before?
00:40:189 (1) - NC for not being bugged.
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4) - in my opinion , i highly recommend you to change this into 1 return-slider.
00:45:996 (5) - NC
00:51:222 (7) - ^
00:51:802 - add a note here?
00:53:738 (8) - NC
01:00:706 (5) - add a finish on the tail
01:16:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - decrease spacing? this is too weird :(
01:17:157 (6) - NC
01:19:093 (7) - ^
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this rhythm is little bit unfit to the song. maybe change like this? http://puu.sh/PqQ2

at last, this map still needs more mods to be ranked ;3 good luck to you guys! :D
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
Nice~

[Easy]
00:16:577 (1) - 嗯...这个是Easy diff 所以spinner最好不要太接近后面的note 在00:18:125这里结束 并且就这个降低音量> > 不会的话问我
00:19:673 (3) - 这个大重音 可以考虑Newcombo
00:23:157 (4) - Newcombo
00:32:060 (1,1,2) - 我的意见是这个.. 这样好听 而且spinner也可以略远离note

00:45:996 (1) - 删掉 然后把前面的spinner延长到这里 （别忘了后面那个00:46:770 (2) 再点下newcombo按钮）
00:58:383 (1) - ^ （或者也可以考虑这个↓）（当然也可以不改。。不过可能会被XAT挑..)

01:09:222 (1,1,2) - ↓


嘛 因为Easy难度最好保留下 不要密集...



[Normal]
Fine

[Hard]
00:19:673 (3) - finish？
00:21:609 (7) - newcombo?
00:27:415 (4) - 考虑直接跟歌词↓

00:35:157 (7) - 跳太大
00:47:544 (1) - 哇 这个spinner意义不明啊 会被当成偷懒的 快删了map掉这里
00:55:286 (1) - 提前到00:57:609结束
01:14:835 (5) - 直接删除
01:18:706 (8,9,1) - 应该是这里连着3个 而不是前面..


[Insane]
00:44:447 (7) - newcombo
00:47:544 (7) - 喂喂这里距离哭了T T
00:48:706 (10) - 这里也哭了
00:50:254 (4) - 这里也是...
00:52:964 (8) - newcombo
00:55:286 (1) - 在00:56:835结束 后面那个往后移一点
01:18:706 (9) - 应该是这里连着3个 而不是前面.. 同Hard那个
01:18:512 (7) - newcombo
01:27:028 (5) - ^

[ExTrA]
01:26:254 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:26:512 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:26:770 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:27:028 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:27:286 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:27:544 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:40:189 (1) - Newcombo it.

00:37:867 (7) - 开头去掉clap
00:48:512 - 去掉clap
01:16:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - 哇这是要逆天
--------------------------------------------------
哇 Remap过了好多了 好评
Kert
2,082 posts
Joined June 2009
Kert
[ExTrA]
00:22:577 (1) - Very awkward slider to play, because it ends on a big white tick
00:25:673 (4) - Similar situation here, but it's on the reverse point
00:35:351 (7) - And this
00:36:512 (1) -
00:41:157 (5) -
00:53:931 (9) -
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Wrong, don't use 1/6 here. Use 1/4
01:27:899 (1) - Loud hitsound on the end of the spinner

I suggest you to read this thread if you haven't

[Insane]
00:19:673 (5) - NC
00:47:544 (7) - Spacing is bad (too close). At least place NC here if you wish to leave it like it is
it will resemble 00:39:415 (11,1) -
00:49:867 (3,4) - Why such spacing D: (too close for no reason)

[Hard]
00:18:899 (1,2) - You could make accent on them somehow. Making it one single pattern with 00:19:673 (3,4,5) - is kind of bad for my taste
00:27:609 (6,7) - Suddenly too far for a Hard
00:30:318 (5,6) - I dunno, but I think it's the same as above ^
00:31:093 (7,8) - ^
00:34:964 (6,7,8) - Where's the spacing?! Jump and then anti-jump D: Almost impossible to read for medium-skilled players
00:42:899 (3,4,5) - ^
00:52:770 (2,3) - I am fine with it, but make the jump smaller
00:54:125 (6,7,8) - Too hard (or make one NC here)
00:54:512 (8,9) - This is unreadable after triangle jump pattern before ^ (awkward antijump)
00:55:286 (1) - End it on 00:57:996 -
01:10:770 (2) - New combo
01:13:286 (11) - I suggest deleting this and adding one circle at 01:13:480 - instead
01:16:189 (10) - I think a longer slider will sound better here
01:18:318 (6,7) - Sudden hard jump
01:18:899 (1) - Delete NC
01:19:286 (3) - Add NC
01:19:093 (11,1) - Sudden hard jump
01:19:286 (1,2) - I'd say unstacking will follow music better
01:20:060 (5) - NC here or delete jump from the previous note

[Normal]
00:19:673 (3) - NC
00:21:222 (5,1) - Switch New combos
00:22:383 (3) - Ends on a big white tick and that's why it's bad to play D:
See the link above I gave for ExTrA diff
You're supposed to start a new combo there generally (I mean big white tick)
00:23:931 (6,7) - Bad upbeat sliders :<
00:32:060 (1,1) - Not enough time for a normal-player to react
Same for other spinners in this diff

[Easy]
I am kind of lazy, because this diff suffers from the same 'sliders issue' + time after spinners
Also, is it me or it has larger spacing than Normal?
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

Kert wrote:

[ExTrA]
00:22:577 (1) - Very awkward slider to play, because it ends on a big white tick
00:25:673 (4) - Similar situation here, but it's on the reverse point
00:35:351 (7) - And this
00:36:512 (1) -
00:41:157 (5) -
00:53:931 (9) -
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Wrong, don't use 1/6 here. Use 1/4
01:27:899 (1) - Loud hitsound on the end of the spinner

I suggest you to read this thread if you haven't

[Insane]
00:19:673 (5) - NC
00:47:544 (7) - Spacing is bad (too close). At least place NC here if you wish to leave it like it is
it will resemble 00:39:415 (11,1) -
00:49:867 (3,4) - Why such spacing D: (too close for no reason)

[Hard]
00:18:899 (1,2) - You could make accent on them somehow. Making it one single pattern with 00:19:673 (3,4,5) - is kind of bad for my taste
00:27:609 (6,7) - Suddenly too far for a Hard
00:30:318 (5,6) - I dunno, but I think it's the same as above ^
00:31:093 (7,8) - ^
00:34:964 (6,7,8) - Where's the spacing?! Jump and then anti-jump D: Almost impossible to read for medium-skilled players
00:42:899 (3,4,5) - ^
00:52:770 (2,3) - I am fine with it, but make the jump smaller
00:54:125 (6,7,8) - Too hard (or make one NC here)
00:54:512 (8,9) - This is unreadable after triangle jump pattern before ^ (awkward antijump)
00:55:286 (1) - End it on 00:57:996 -
01:10:770 (2) - New combo
01:13:286 (11) - I suggest deleting this and adding one circle at 01:13:480 - instead
01:16:189 (10) - I think a longer slider will sound better here
01:18:318 (6,7) - Sudden hard jump
01:18:899 (1) - Delete NC
01:19:286 (3) - Add NC
01:19:093 (11,1) - Sudden hard jump
01:19:286 (1,2) - I'd say unstacking will follow music better
01:20:060 (5) - NC here or delete jump from the previous note

[Normal]
00:19:673 (3) - NC
00:21:222 (5,1) - Switch New combos
00:22:383 (3) - Ends on a big white tick and that's why it's bad to play D:
See the link above I gave for ExTrA diff
You're supposed to start a new combo there generally (I mean big white tick)
00:23:931 (6,7) - Bad upbeat sliders :<
00:32:060 (1,1) - Not enough time for a normal-player to react
Same for other spinners in this diff

[Easy]
I am kind of lazy, because this diff suffers from the same 'sliders issue' + time after spinners
Also, is it me or it has larger spacing than Normal?
I will check it,thanks a lot :3
JauiPlaY
1,308 posts
Joined April 2010
JauiPlaY
hi
一些建议

[General]
把自己名字写进tags到底是有多蠢

[Easy]
00:18:899 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - clap呢
00:32:060 (1) - 略短 而且后面跟得太紧不科学
00:38:254 (1) - ^
00:44:447 (1) - ^
后面还有好多 不说了...
01:18:899 - 加note
前面的combo数略长 尽量控制在4以下比较好

[Normal]
00:50:641 (1) - 这结尾是手滑了?
00:54:899 (1) - 从后面的长白线开始比较好

[Hard]
00:32:060 (1,1,2,3) - 还不如一个spinner到底...
00:36:318 - 加note
00:38:254 (5) - 这奇葩音效是什么情况
00:44:447 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 吵 另外(7)加个nc 而且叠起来感觉很没有可玩性
00:54:125 (6,7,8) - 起码加个nc呗
01:05:544 (7) - 放后面白线比较好
01:27:028 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 叠起来感觉很没有可玩性

[Insane]
00:36:318 - 求加note然后加nc然后去后面nc
00:44:447 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 和hard一样
00:47:351 - 求加note
01:10:770 (5) - 进kiai起码加个nc吧
clap用得有点奇葩

[ExTrA]
00:51:899 - 不加note吗
01:13:673 (2,3,4) - 极度不合歌啊这...
01:27:802 (1) - finish
感觉音效也有待提高

另外音效是不是普遍有点偏大
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya


[General]
nothing

[Easy]
  1. 00:22:383: how about move them to x104 y68 ? it'll make a better flow
  2. 00:41:738: 3rd slider point to x400 y8?
  3. 01:12:706: 2nd slider point 2 grid up and 3rd point 3grid right?
[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
  1. 00:48:706: nc?
  2. 00:49:093: if you do so ^ then remove nc on here
  3. 01:05:738: supposed to be 1 grid up
[Insane]
  1. 00:35:351: add note?
[ExTrA]
  1. In my opinion, this diff should be name as "Extra"
  2. 01:27:802: add finish?
thats all I can find, nice map :D
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

- t e n n y a - wrote:



[General]
nothing

[Easy]
  1. 00:22:383: how about move them to x104 y68 ? it'll make a better flow
  2. 00:41:738: 3rd slider point to x400 y8?
  3. 01:12:706: 2nd slider point 2 grid up and 3rd point 3grid right?
[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
  1. 00:48:706: nc?
  2. 00:49:093: if you do so ^ then remove nc on here
  3. 01:05:738: supposed to be 1 grid up
[Insane]
  1. 00:35:351: add note?
[ExTrA]
  1. In my opinion, this diff should be name as "Extra"
  2. 01:27:802: add finish?
thats all I can find, nice map :D
thanks a lot,I'll check it. :)
cmn_891127
1,308 posts
Joined July 2010
cmn_891127
Hi, Sagisawa-Yukari~
Sorry for delay, my midterm is so crazy

[General]
NCs and hitsounds are really disorder in all diffs

[ExTrA]
00:31:093 (1) - remove NC
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - So cute, I like it, while I am not sure it is rankable. Maybe you can combine them into one slider
00:59:544 (x) - add a note here
01:15:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not so regular, you can use Ctrl+Shift+D
01:23:157 (1) - I suggest you to add a note in the center before spinner

[Insane]
01:12:318 (6,7,8,9) - I prefer the rhythm like x_xxx
01:15:415 (6,7,8,9) - ^
01:18:512 (1,2,3,4) -

[Hard]
01:18:512 (7,8,9,1) - like [Insane]

[Normal]
00:32:060 (1,1) - in Normal/Easy diff, such spinner is not recommended, since it is too close to the next note, which is hard to the new play
00:55:286 (1) - ^
01:07:673 (1) - ^
01:23:157 (1) - ^
00:54:899 (x) - add a note here

[Easy]
00:38:254 (1) - same
01:13:867 (1,2,3,4,1) - why not set like pentagon

Good Luck~
Midasmens
507 posts
Joined June 2011
Midasmens
小米來看圖~
request in-game~

General
為啥tags裡有自己的名字 lol
整體說一下~需要改進的地方很多w 音效、排列都有~
新手要學會積累經驗哦~
~~~~~~

Easy
HP & OD +1
首先這個難度的clap似乎沒有一定的規律像2 4 clap那樣~同時音效也比較雜亂無章呢~所以最好加強音效方面的能力哦~
00:16:577 (1) - 這一開始的spinner結尾怎麼那麼大聲吶~減小一點
00:25:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - combo數字達到6不適合easy難度~NC方面多考慮
00:38:254 (1,1) - 這個spinner後面的slider出現的實在是太快了~對於新手來說肯定會鬱悶的~一定要改（建議去掉spinner換成別的）
01:07:673 (1) - 在 01:09:222 這裡就結束吧
01:21:609 (1) - 後移1/2
01:21:609 (1) - 是想中線對稱麼?
SPOILER
01:26:254 (1) - 來個finish結尾
~~~~~~

Normal
00:16:576 (1) - 爲什麽不和easy一樣結尾消音呢?
00:23:931 (5) - NC
00:32:060 (1) - 結尾聲音小聲點
01:26:254 (1) - finish
~~~~~~

Hard
00:20:835 (6) - 碰到了血條~Rule裡有規定最好不要碰到~所以降低一點
01:04:576 (4,5) - 放正了~
SPOILER
01:05:738 (7) - NC
01:15:222 (1) - ^
01:20:060 (7) - ^
01:27:802 (13) - 這裡用finish不是很好嘛~~其它難度也要保持一樣w
~~~~~~

Insane
00:25:867 (8) - NC
00:55:286 (1) - 在 00:57:609 這裡結束~
01:09:415 - 明顯有個音~加note
~~~~~~

ExTrA
不覺得這個diff的clap有點大聲麼~~考慮換一個clap音或者降低音量w
00:16:577 - 好奇爲什麽其它diff都有的spinner在這裡卻沒有了~ ._.
00:24:125 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 喜歡這裡~梗不錯
00:30:802 - 這裡考慮價格note~否則會感覺太空了
00:45:996 (5) - NC
00:51:222 (7,8,9,10) - 略吵~
01:13:673 (2,4) - 雖然堆成梗很好~但總感覺有點違和~可能是vocal這裡是兩個音而卻用一個長slider導致少了什麽的感覺
01:16:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個打起來不舒服w
01:27:899 (1) - 結尾消音~
~~~~~~

好了~就這些~作為新手還算湊合~不過要改進的地方有很多很多~
多多領悟~積累經驗 ~ 一定能做的很好的吶 >3<
Good Luck~

٩(๑╹◡╹๑)۶
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi, Sagisawa-Yukari~
Sorry for delay, my midterm is so crazy

[General]
NCs and hitsounds are really disorder in all diffs

[ExTrA]
00:31:093 (1) - remove NC
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - So cute, I like it, while I am not sure it is rankable. Maybe you can combine them into one slider
00:59:544 (x) - add a note here
01:15:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not so regular, you can use Ctrl+Shift+D
01:23:157 (1) - I suggest you to add a note in the center before spinner

[Insane]
01:12:318 (6,7,8,9) - I prefer the rhythm like x_xxx
01:15:415 (6,7,8,9) - ^
01:18:512 (1,2,3,4) -

[Hard]
01:18:512 (7,8,9,1) - like [Insane]

[Normal]
00:32:060 (1,1) - in Normal/Easy diff, such spinner is not recommended, since it is too close to the next note, which is hard to the new play
00:55:286 (1) - ^
01:07:673 (1) - ^
01:23:157 (1) - ^
00:54:899 (x) - add a note here

[Easy]
00:38:254 (1) - same
01:13:867 (1,2,3,4,1) - why not set like pentagon

Good Luck~
OK，时间晚点没关系啦，非常感谢XD
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari
:?

Midasmens wrote:

小米來看圖~
request in-game~

General
為啥tags裡有自己的名字 lol
整體說一下~需要改進的地方很多w 音效、排列都有~
新手要學會積累經驗哦~
~~~~~~

Easy
HP & OD +1
首先這個難度的clap似乎沒有一定的規律像2 4 clap那樣~同時音效也比較雜亂無章呢~所以最好加強音效方面的能力哦~
00:16:577 (1) - 這一開始的spinner結尾怎麼那麼大聲吶~減小一點
00:25:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - combo數字達到6不適合easy難度~NC方面多考慮
00:38:254 (1,1) - 這個spinner後面的slider出現的實在是太快了~對於新手來說肯定會鬱悶的~一定要改（建議去掉spinner換成別的）
01:07:673 (1) - 在 01:09:222 這裡就結束吧
01:21:609 (1) - 後移1/2
01:21:609 (1) - 是想中線對稱麼?
SPOILER
01:26:254 (1) - 來個finish結尾
~~~~~~

Normal
00:16:576 (1) - 爲什麽不和easy一樣結尾消音呢?
00:23:931 (5) - NC
00:32:060 (1) - 結尾聲音小聲點
01:26:254 (1) - finish
~~~~~~

Hard
00:20:835 (6) - 碰到了血條~Rule裡有規定最好不要碰到~所以降低一點
01:04:576 (4,5) - 放正了~
SPOILER
01:05:738 (7) - NC
01:15:222 (1) - ^
01:20:060 (7) - ^
01:27:802 (13) - 這裡用finish不是很好嘛~~其它難度也要保持一樣w
~~~~~~

Insane
00:25:867 (8) - NC
00:55:286 (1) - 在 00:57:609 這裡結束~
01:09:415 - 明顯有個音~加note
~~~~~~

ExTrA
不覺得這個diff的clap有點大聲麼~~考慮換一個clap音或者降低音量w
00:16:577 - 好奇爲什麽其它diff都有的spinner在這裡卻沒有了~ ._.
00:24:125 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 喜歡這裡~梗不錯
00:30:802 - 這裡考慮價格note~否則會感覺太空了
00:45:996 (5) - NC
00:51:222 (7,8,9,10) - 略吵~
01:13:673 (2,4) - 雖然堆成梗很好~但總感覺有點違和~可能是vocal這裡是兩個音而卻用一個長slider導致少了什麽的感覺
01:16:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個打起來不舒服w
01:27:899 (1) - 結尾消音~
~~~~~~

好了~就這些~作為新手還算湊合~不過要改進的地方有很多很多~
多多領悟~積累經驗 ~ 一定能做的很好的吶 >3<
Good Luck~

٩(๑╹◡╹๑)۶
非常感谢，作为新手要学的东西还很多，也很谢谢能抽空来看新人的图，我会努力的XD
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
Easy:
AR2略低建议至少+1

00:38:254 (1) - 建议换别的节奏 easy用这么短的转盘 很难通过
01:21:222 (1) - 建议这个转盘从01:21:609起 更适合

Normal：
OD HP+1 跟easy一样不太好
00:32:060 (1) - 这转盘结束的时间有些莫名其妙
01:23:544 (1) - 建议从01:23:157开始

Hard：
OD HP+1 更好点
00:44:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 我觉得hard要用这种连打不如替换成短滑条
00:55:286 (1) - 这个转盘跟normal前面那个一样 停的这个红线的时间很莫名其妙 因为这里也没有啥节奏能对应你这个停止的时间
01:15:028 (X) - 建议加note 节奏连接更舒服
01:27:028 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 同55秒 不多述（主要我是觉得你hard上面还有2个难度 是不是不太适合这么早就用了连打梗 个人偏见）

Insane：
00:21:415 (X) - 建议加note 节奏更连贯
01:09:222 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏不对头 extra那个这里的节奏才更像是对的

Extra：
AR9有点大了吧 感觉用不上
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4) - lol不坏但是我不知道别人会不会来找茬
后面对称梗觉醒了嘛

。感觉节奏还可以更改善一些 有的地方可以下节奏的但是有空着 我个人感觉下了似乎更舒服 有的节奏感觉可以更符合音乐一些，不过感觉这些东西需要循序渐进慢慢涨经验.

音效方面建议clap用的更整齐一些 现在感觉似乎有些哪里想起来就下哪里. 顺便多一些whistle和finish也能增添感觉.
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
wantuole
for M4M
[General]
ok
bg不考虑换吗？ 全难度玩一遍 已经看到我眼睛密密麻麻的 肯定rating↓
[easy]
00:18:899 (1) - remove whistle 这么早的哨音太响了 吓人用
00:21:609 (1,2),00:23:157 (1,2,3), 需要这些whistle？ 如果需要 其他地方也相应的加上
这里00:25:867 (1,2), 这里00:28:964 (1,2,3,4)
音效感觉你是按照自己喜欢的下？ 太乱了 下次可以试着关了音乐听听音效 可以学更多
00:39:802 (1) - 出现的300盖住的hp
00:41:738 (2) - end remove whistle 这个结尾的音效太糟了点
00:46:770 (1) - 新手难度来说 转盘结束出现的位子有点太远 想象下新人转完后看到下个1在这里的慌乱感 00:49:093 (1) - 叠在这个1上
00:58:383 (1) - ^
01:13:867 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 多个单点对于新手太难了
[Normal]
00:23:931 (1) - 玩起来不是很丑的slider 但是edit里看起来太丑了
00:21:222 (3,1) - ？下在长白NC不容易被吐槽 不过你这样也可以 对应自己的摆设和音效
00:25:480 (3,1) - ^
00:27:415 (4) - NC
:| 好吧 看了下整体NC 我不吐槽这些了 我就看看 如果你没把握的话 最好长白附近加NC
01:07:673 这里开始是spin
01:15:415 (1,2,3) - 1 2堆叠就够了 从节奏上感觉
[hard]
难度跨度好大？ 那么多连打 像00:44:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
kiai地方可以接受 前面略微减少难度 推荐部分rep会更安全
[Aoiko]
？ 原来是太鼓难度
最好换个名字 好容易认错的说
[Insane]
00:35:544 (10) - 穿hp 好评
00:42:512 (6) - ^
00:45:222 (9) - 9的弧度不太对应前面的连打 硬梆梆的感觉
00:47:544 (7,8,9) - 节奏松散
00:49:093 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:13:867 (2) - ^ 进hp
01:20:060 (1) - 跳太远了
？为啥kiai做的总是不错 好评个
[extra]
fine
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以考虑拉开点 不需要表现的那么厚重的堆叠
:? 我收回前面fine的评价 你这鬼畜的kiai 至少请保持前面的作图手法 突然改成对称旋转风格


就这些 祝你好运
Heatherfield
927 posts
Joined March 2010
Heatherfield
earning kd for tsuka's map
[General]
BG的确有点花
另外自己的名字大概不用放在tags里
我觉得最后加个spinner挺好的 可以考虑一下insane和hard也加一下

[ExTrA]
00:45:996 (5) - 建议给个new combo,后面的数字显得有点大
01:09:222 (1,2,3,4) - 有点不是很好读的感觉..感觉不要stack比较好点
01:13:480 (1,2,3,4) - 这里和vocal不太搭,建议这几个整体往后移1/2 原先的1那里可以加个note

[Insane]
00:48:706 (11) - 这个离得好像有点近

[Hard]
00:30:512 (6) - new combo?
00:36:512 (1) - 这里的nc移到2上比较好点
01:04:964 (5) - 可以关掉grid snap然后开0.0x对准 现在这样不太好看

good luck!
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
sherrie__fay
mod req via PM

[Easy]
  1. 00:46:770 (1,3) - 下移一格
  2. 00:53:738 (1,2) - 结尾clap
  3. 01:01:480 (1) - 上移一格 和00:58:383 (1) - 对齐
  4. 01:07:673 (1) - finish
[Normal]
  1. 01:10:770 (1) - 开头finish
[Hard]
  1. delete bookmark
  2. 00:19:673 (3) - 左移一格 放到y轴
  3. 00:31:286 (8) - 和6没有重叠好
  4. 00:32:060 (1) - +finish
  5. 00:44:447 (7) - 这slider很坑 建议改成xxxxx x的节奏
  6. 00:53:544 (4,5) - 右移一格 放到y轴
  7. 00:59:544 (5) - 建议位置X:480 Y:252
  8. 01:10:770 (1) - 开头finish
  9. 01:23:157 (1) - finish
  10. 01:25:867 (2,4) - 下移一小格
[Insane]
  1. 00:21:028 (8) - 没有重叠好【←强迫症
  2. 00:25:673 - +note
  3. 00:31:673 (9) - NC
  4. 00:33:609 (3) - 开头finish
  5. 00:45:996 (1) - NC should be here and finish at start
  6. 00:47:351 - add note x:268 y:112
  7. 00:49:093 (1) - 最好和00:48:706 (10) - 重叠起来
  8. 01:06:706 (4) - 不好好修下形会死嘛【←强迫症
  9. 01:07:286 (5) - 右移一格 对准y轴【←强迫症
  10. 01:10:770 (1) - 开头finish
  11. 01:22:770 (9) - 也放y轴做对称好了【吗的这diff是不是专给强迫症找不痛快啊
[ExTrA]
  1. 00:19:673 (1) - +finish
  2. 00:21:028 (1) - 去掉NC 明明是一样的spacing
  3. 00:25:383 (2,3) - 我觉得整体这两个往下移一格看上去比较得劲 也仅仅是比较得劲而已
  4. 00:25:673 (4) - 中间加finish
  5. 00:31:093 (2) - 这个前后spacing不一致却沿用相同排列的才需要+NC
  6. 00:33:609 (1) - 开头finish
  7. 00:43:673 (8) - 1 grid left(grid level 4
  8. 00:45:996 (5) - NC?
  9. 00:51:415 (8) - 强烈建议把这个note拿出来
  10. 00:54:706 (11) - 删掉 把10换成折返 哦对10的尾和9的头贴在一起会影响美观 建议把10的角度换一下
  11. 00:58:383 (1) - finish
  12. 00:59:157 (4) - +reverse
  13. 01:03:028 (8) - 同理和前面45贴在一起了
  14. 01:04:576 (4) - finish
  15. 01:27:802 (1) - finish
卧槽这图绝逼是我等强迫症所不能忍啊啊啊
mod的时候快要哭了都ojz
Flower
1,740 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
Hi~ qq request~

好像是亿千万那个的 好评
看这6diff架势感觉好像那个We Survive
最高难度排列方面严重建议大改

[Eazy]
能告诉我明明DS1.0能拉很开为什么还用1.2？依我看0.9都不错。目测鬼畜。
好像用的音效乱了点，建议还是跟24白线clap。
建议remap。
00:31:673 - break
00:36:706 (1) - Finish
00:39:028 - clap
00:42:899 (1) - 移开些，和前面的碰到了难看
01:04:576 - finish
01:20:060 (2) - 这就没对称……
01:25:480 (1,2) - 离转盘有些近了 建议去掉，让01:26:254 (1) 在 01:25:480 开始

[Normal]
00:18:898 (1) - 离转盘太近 让转盘在00:18:125 - 结束？
00:32:060 (1) - 同。而且有点短
00:38:254 (1) - ^
00:40:189 (2) - 这什么
00:44:447 (1) - 同样问题
00:45:996 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+Shift+D重摆
00:50:641 (1) - 这类转盘我就不说了 自行检查吧（等下好像后面没有了 囧）
01:14:641 - whistle？

[Hard]
00:27:512 (5) - 有点建议去掉 或者放在00:27:706 -
00:30:512 (6) - NC
00:40:576 (3) - 会碰到血条 下移一点
00:44:447 (7) - 要么改成转盘要么改成1/4kick slider 这个这么慢没激情
00:45:802 (1) - 跳小一点？这么大略难读
01:01:480 (3) - 建议延长到 01:01:770 -
01:04:964 (5) - 没叠好
01:12:318 (6) - NC
01:13:480 (1,3) - 交换NC
01:15:028 (1,3) - ^
01:16:770 (1,2) - ^
01:18:609 (8) - 改到01:18:802 -

[Insane]
00:22:480 (5) - 跟Hard一样
00:23:544 (9) - 这什么……要么前奏的相应部分全部加上要么去掉
00:39:802 (1) - 有点建议这个叠在00:39:415 (12) - 下面 不然还以为是1/2
00:45:222 (9) - 要么改成串要么改成1/4折返条 理由同hard
00:47:351 - 加一个note？
00:47:544 (7) - NC
01:21:415 (3,5) - 两个中选一个NC？

[Extra]
叫Extra多没意思……而且也不是真的有那么难 换个名字多好 Suicidal啦Deadly啦Heroic啦Legendary啦
而且遮挡太乱 有时间最好remap一下对比一下梗然后再remap第三次（好吧当我没说）
00:21:028 (1,1) - 遮挡丑 往下移
00:25:093 (1,2,3) - 很难读而且没有什么梗 建议向左下至少偏移两格
00:25:093 (1,4) - 交换NC
00:27:802 (3,4,5,7) - 移到上面去 00:27:802 (3) - 的位置大致是x=328 y=68 其他顺移，这样可以不让00:28:964 (1) - 被遮挡
00:28:964 (1) - 建议略微顺时针旋转以使滑条尾对准00:29:544 (2) -
00:31:673 (3) - 间距一样不好读图 建议旋转180放到对面
00:51:802 - 可加个note，一般这种二连有点讨厌
00:54:318 (10,11) - 敢放开点么>_<
00:59:157 (4) - 挡住略难看 要么叠在00:58:189 (15) - 下面
00:58:189 (15) - 这么明显一个finish还用我说么……
01:01:480 (3) - reverse arrow被挡住了 nuke
01:16:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - 放到01:16:189 - 好听些，但是01:16:770 - 01:16:867 - 还是要加note
01:16:964 (5) - NC
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这什么……1/4滑条摆满都好听一些 或者删掉01:27:544 (6) ，在01:27:415 - 01:27:609 - 各加一个1/4滑条
01:30:802 - 虽然别人也这么摆但建议在01:30:899 - 结束 因为最后转盘声音会突然降低

[Taiko]
d=小红 k=小蓝 D=大红 K=大蓝

感觉没什么梗 打起来比较累 基本目押
我觉得还是24白线k比较稳当 kiai用红线k
以下仅为建议 （注意：由于我是边改边加相应NC的所以可能有不同）
00:18:899 (1,1,1,1) - d比k重 建议红蓝反过来
00:21:609 (4) - k
00:23:351 - d
00:24:125 - d
00:29:351 (5) - k
00:41:931 (1) - k
00:44:447 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 全部k似乎舒服些？参考本家RELATIONS最后一段
00:46:383 (1) - k
00:51:028 (6,7,8) - k
00:57:222 (2) - 移动到00:57:125 -
00:57:415 - K
00:57:996 (5) - k
01:04:964 (1,2) - k
01:08:060 (1) - k
01:08:835 (1) - k
01:09:222 (1) - D
至于kiai建议重做一遍，跟vocal的话就基本对不上节奏。具体可以参考999红的GOGOTIME。





Good luck~
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hello there

[General]
* Overall, you having a lacks of hitsound in all diff. Please add clap when the object is snap at 2nd and 4th ticks


[Easy]
01:25:480 (1,2) - This overlapped by spinner-osu and hitbursts from spinner. It can be hidden for players at gameplay


[Normal]
00:23:931 (1) - This slider looks awkward for me. Make a wave slider?
00:39:802 (1) - Too far from spinner, it could be hard to reach for beginners
00:45:996 (1) - ^
00:52:189 (1) - ^
00:52:576 (2) - It overlapped by spinner-osu, and it's hidden for beginners
01:25:480 (1,2) - Overlapped by hitbursts, it can be hidden for players


[Hard]
00:19:673 (3) - New combo?
00:30:318 (5,1) - These jump looks awkward and surprising for me. Consider to fix the spacing
00:44:447 (7) - New combo?
00:59:738 (1,2,3) - This doesn't looks stack correctly while gameplay


[Insane]
00:19:673 (5) - New combo?
00:22:770 (7) - ^
00:26:641 (3) - The head slider is touch the HP Bar
00:37:480 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This pattern part looks boring without any slider. Consider to add slider around this part


I guess this map needs a bit more mod before bubble. Get 3 or more mods, and then PM me for recheck
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

[General]
* Overall, you having a lacks of hitsound in all diff. Please add clap when the object is snap at 2nd and 4th ticks


[Easy]
01:25:480 (1,2) - This overlapped by spinner-osu and hitbursts from spinner. It can be hidden for players at gameplay


[Normal]
00:23:931 (1) - This slider looks awkward for me. Make a wave slider?
00:39:802 (1) - Too far from spinner, it could be hard to reach for beginners
00:45:996 (1) - ^
00:52:189 (1) - ^
00:52:576 (2) - It overlapped by spinner-osu, and it's hidden for beginners
01:25:480 (1,2) - Overlapped by hitbursts, it can be hidden for players


[Hard]
00:19:673 (3) - New combo?
00:30:318 (5,1) - These jump looks awkward and surprising for me. Consider to fix the spacing
00:44:447 (7) - New combo?
00:59:738 (1,2,3) - This doesn't looks stack correctly while gameplay


[Insane]
00:19:673 (5) - New combo?
00:22:770 (7) - ^
00:26:641 (3) - The head slider is touch the HP Bar
00:37:480 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This pattern part looks boring without any slider. Consider to add slider around this part


I guess this map needs a bit more mod before bubble. Get 3 or more mods, and then PM me for recheck
OK,thanks a lot.XD
Athena Tennos
1,038 posts
Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos
A-tan's mod~

[Easy]
  1. 00:34:383 (3) - 试试中间加个红点。两面。。。。orz像这样。。摆放位置自己调一下把~
    SPOILER
  2. 00:41:738 (2) - 把1包好~>_>
  3. 00:49:093 (1,2) - 2没拉好。。拉得和1一样>_>~
[Normal]
  1. 00:23:931 (1) - 这是神马诡异的东西/。\...
  2. 貌似没什么好看的了。。。很规矩~
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:641 - add note？~距离和后面那个一样就好了~
  2. 00:23:738 - add note？~
  3. orz....没什么其他的了。orz。。。总感觉我的mod好少。orz
[Insane]
  1. 01:27:899 - add spinner..在01:30:899 - 结束~？
  2. 大体没问题、、、不过slider的美观就有点。。。试试把所有的slider都拉的好看点。。均匀点？~
[EXT燃?]
  1. 郁闷我pass不了。orz。。。跪了
  2. 00:19:770 - delete？~然后移开点？~
  3. 00:20:641 (7) - 这里节奏有问题。。。移到00:20:738 - ？。。。感觉有点奇葩。。。要不这里改成sldier？~
  4. 00:23:738 (4) - ^....节奏问题。往后移1/4
  5. 00:26:641 (8) - 延长1/4拍？~然后00:27:028 - +个note？~
  6. 00:29:931 (4) - 你这个节奏是故意的么.....往后移1/4拍？~。。。orz
  7. 01:20:060 (1,2) - 对称。。
  8. 01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 全部改成1/4的节奏？~。。。1/6好诡异。
    SPOILER
Good Luck~=w=~
and Star！~
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
General
  1. 00:18:415 - , 01:24:512 - 說一下這種slider結尾靜音，其實不適合放在spinner的前1/4 或 1/2拍，後移到長白線的位置
  2. SRWOG2.jpg 這張BG應該沒用上吧，可以刪掉
  3. 話說Preview time的位置聽著不太對勁，是不想設在kiai嗎?
  4. 之前雖然說過這歌不適合無腦下24clap，但最主要還是保持音效的規律，只是以目前來說…音效像時有時無的…或者說難度與難度之間基本沒有規律性可言。所以Leorda的建議其實沒有說錯，不過他一天mod那麼多圖懶的跟你細挑哪裡要怎麼補音效吧 囧

Easy
  1. Easy跟24clap的話其實很傷感，畢竟節奏都基於13拍，加在13上反而更好
    00:33:996 (2,3,4,5) - 這邊不下clap是有什麼原因嗎?
    01:10:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 兩個slider各前移1/1拍 (音效也要一起修改)


01:13:867 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Normal
  • 00:26:254 (2) - 這邊1/1疊的意義似乎不大，分開放打起來也比較順手: http://puu.sh/1qrcB
    00:38:254 (1) - 為何放spinner在這奇葩的位置! 相比下00:32:060 - 這個位置用spinner比較正常，建議替換成長slider
    00:50:641 (1) - ^
    01:03:415 (1,3) - clap

Hard
  • 00:21:996 (3) - slider head加上whistle
    00:27:802 (6) - whistle
    00:28:189 (8) - slider head加上whistle
    00:41:738 (5,10) - clap
    00:44:447 (1) - 這一串的音量需要下調，其實保持60%也行，提高到80%反而有些礙耳的感覺…?
    00:45:222 (2) - 可以挪開一些? 畢竟和前面的節拍是1/2，有重疊的話容易讀成1/4
    00:45:996 (5,1) - 這邊clap就下太多了，如果打算紅線下clap就不如乾脆整段都這麼做
    00:59:738 (1,2,3) - 連打沒有疊好
    01:10:770 - 以我個人來說，kiai的音效必須比通常段要豐富，這裡給我感覺剛好相反…不夠激情!! (喂

Insane
  1. 音效要靠你修改了!
    00:24:318 (1,2) - 不太適合縮短間短
    00:32:060 (1) - spinner結尾的音量可以稍往下降
    00:34:770 (8) - 考慮在這邊new combo?
    00:44:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 同Hard, 另外看不太懂這一串的音量變化有何用…從80上升到100再馬上下降到60後接80?
    00:48:318 (4,5) - 這個位置00:48:512 - 有note的話，用這個間距也無妨…但現在沒有，所以間距需要修改
    01:09:222 (1,2,3,4) - 嚴重懷疑這裡是1/3拍子

ExTrA
  1. 感覺kiai前後的排列風格轉換挺突然的
    00:18:415 - 綠線後移1/4拍
    00:25:093 (1) - 據說這種slider重疊需要做個小偏移
    01:09:222 (1,2,3,4) - 換成1/3拍子
    01:13:673 (2,3,4) - 由於目前的節奏沒有對上歌曲，建議將這三個note後移1/2拍，然後於01:13:673 - 這個位置補上一個circle


最後的難度保留意見，加油
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
Hi there~~ mod from queue~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]
  1. Your taiko diff is still osu format V9, please open it and then save directly to update it to v10 and then upload your mapset
  2. Uncheck Letterbox During Breaks due to there's video
  3. Remove your name from tags........
[Easy]
  1. 00:22:383 (3) - here. End a slider at long-white-tick (downbeat) is not a good idea except special cases. Both music(drum) and vocal start from 00:22:770 - , so it's better to place something for player to "click down" for better sense imo :)

    and it's not only issued in Easy diff but all other diffs
  2. 00:31:867 - unnecessary break~
  3. 00:39:802 (1,2) - make a better parallel?
  4. 00:41:351 (1,2) - try to make the blanket here better?
    SPOILER
  5. 00:48:318 (3) - remove finish, it's too heavy here~
  6. 01:16:964 (2) - move NC to here for downbeat
[Normal]
  1. 00:24:706 (2) - looked weird... how about this shape?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:32:060 - remove break
  3. 00:35:157 (1) - not a good shape : too curved... try this one?
    80,100,35157,6,0,B|48:140|60:196,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  4. 00:54:899 - add a note for consistent beat
  5. 01:06:512 (2) - also weird shape~~ to this kinda short slider, red node may be a good choice
    SPOILER
  6. 01:20:835 (3) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:27:802 (6,7) - recommend to stack them, or don't stack 00:27:415 (4,5) -
  2. 00:41:351 (4) - NC?
  3. 00:44:447 (1) - it's really heard...weird....i think 1/4 beats here is unnecessary...
  4. 00:49:480 (3) - change to a 1/2 repeat slider?
  5. 00:53:738 (1) - bad stack here... i prefer a jump to stack..
  6. 01:17:544 (2,3) - touch HP bar
  7. 01:19:673 (6) - ctrl+g for better flow?
  8. 01:25:867 - i can't understand why you leave a blank here...both drum and vocal has beat here so i highly recommend a note
  9. 01:27:028 (3) - and this end is also a bad choice imo.
[Insane]
  1. 00:22:383 (4,5,6) - an odd beat here~~hmm....i think here could be several shift like:



  2. 00:28:964 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 00:40:673 (4,5) - move to next red-tick to make triplet with 00:40:964 (6) -
  4. 00:41:351 (1) - how about change it to a 1/2 or 3/4 slider?
  5. 00:43:673 (5,6,1) - also odd blanks here, why not fill some beats here?
  6. 00:46:770 (4) - and this kinda slider... i notice similar shape many times in your map and i don't like the shape...either red-node or symmetrical is better than your choice imo
    red-node sample
    symmetrical sample
  7. 00:48:512 - add a note here or make the beat here like:

    it is a good place for triplet
  8. 01:02:641 (7,8,9) - suitable stack can improve the playability of your map but overuse it will ruin the flow
  9. 01:04:189 (3,4,5) - still odd beats
  10. 01:05:351 (7) - to be honest i can't very agree with it -- both placement and beat. If you wanna a symmetrical placement here, i highly recommend you to move it 1/2 tick prev for vocal and then add a note at 01:05:738 -
  11. 01:07:480 - start spinner here?
[ExTrA]
  1. HP+1 OD-1 to balance the difficulty
  2. 00:31:673 (2) - +NC to emphasize
  3. 00:35:157 (6,7) - i suppose this kinda stack may break the flow
  4. 00:41:157 (5) - change to a 1/4 repeat slider?
  5. 00:42:318 - add a note
  6. 00:48:706 - ^
  7. 00:50:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i cannot see any reason to place a stream here with weird claps at beginning and end
  8. 00:51:609 (9,10) - remove claps
  9. 00:59:157 (4) - add a repeat
  10. and about kiai.... to be honest...symmetrical placement is not suitable imo
that's all, good luck with the rank~
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod~

[Easy]
  1. 00:34:383 (3) - 试试中间加个红点。两面。。。。orz像这样。。摆放位置自己调一下把~
    SPOILER
    --I'll fix it :D
  2. 00:41:738 (2) - 把1包好~>_> --OK~
  3. 00:49:093 (1,2) - 2没拉好。。拉得和1一样>_>~
--这里本来就打算一样啦

[Normal]
  1. 00:23:931 (1) - 这是神马诡异的东西/。\...--I'll make a better,thanks~
  2. 貌似没什么好看的了。。。很规矩~
[Hard]
  1. 00:20:641 - add note？~距离和后面那个一样就好了~ --唔。。这里加了会不会感觉有点别扭。。
  2. 00:23:738 - add note？~ --因为是hard所以不想要太多连打O3O
  3. orz....没什么其他的了。orz。。。总感觉我的mod好少。orz
[Insane]
  1. 01:27:899 - add spinner..在01:30:899 - 结束~？--除了EX其他我感觉到这里结束就可以了吧。。
  2. 大体没问题、、、不过slider的美观就有点。。。试试把所有的slider都拉的好看点。。均匀点？~
[EXT燃?]
  1. 郁闷我pass不了。orz。。。跪了
  2. 00:19:770 - delete？~然后移开点？~ -- 感觉没什么问题。。
  3. 00:20:641 (7) - 这里节奏有问题。。。移到00:20:738 - ？。。。感觉有点奇葩。。。要不这里改成sldier？~ --OK，I'll move to00:20:738 -
  4. 00:23:738 (4) - ^....节奏问题。往后移1/4 --听上去没问题
  5. 00:26:641 (8) - 延长1/4拍？~然后00:27:028 - +个note？~ --这样没问题吧
  6. 00:29:931 (4) - 你这个节奏是故意的么.....往后移1/4拍？~。。。orz --听上去感觉没问题呀O3O
  7. 01:20:060 (1,2) - 对称。。 --Let me think about it
  8. 01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 全部改成1/4的节奏？~。。。1/6好诡异。
    SPOILER
--让几个人玩下来试试没啥问题不过还是谢谢~

Good Luck~=w=~
and Star！~
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