As requested...
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General]
- Your bitrate is currently 256kbp VBR (variable). It must be at or below 192kbs so, please change it to 192kbp CBR (constant).[
Easy]
- You have to rename this to Normal
Derekku wrote:
Difficulties of a mapset must be in a consecutive order. Making three hard/insane difficulties and throwing an easy or normal in is unacceptable and won't get your map ranked. Therefore, difficulties must be in a consecutive order such as Easy-Normal-Hard or Normal-Hard-Insane. A gap in difficulties (e.g. Easy-Normal-Insane) will not be allowed.
This difficulty feel like a Normal to me because of how many hit circles they are so rename it to Normal.
- Unsnapped notes, check ai mod (ctrl+shift+a)
00:50:551 (5) Don't use kick slider. Try repeating slider and a hitcircle instead ...
http://puu.sh/5MLo01:07:426 (1,2,3 1,2,3) All straight sliders and box pattern, try something more interesting. Here's a easy way to make it better
http://puu.sh/5MLR01:30:676 (1,2,3) Boring again. A simple way to make it nicer is, Ctrl + H slider 1 & 3 and adjust the following part, but if you don't want to remap this part.... try this
http://puu.sh/5MMk01:39:676 (1,2,3) Boring... try something interesting and don't use kick slider (sliders with more than one repeat)
02:01:051 (1,2 1,2 1,2 1,2) The same pattern 4 times! Try to create more variety and do something else.
02:27:667 (1,2,3) Straight sliders... Ctrl + J (2) and try something like this
http://puu.sh/5MMZ02:34:979 (2 3) Make them symmetrical
http://puu.sh/5MNc03:06:667 (3,4) More interesting like this
http://puu.sh/5MNq Adjust the part after accordingly.
03:11:542 (1,2,3,4) 4 straight sliders all pointing to the same direction... do something more interesting.
03:22:698 (3,4) Like this
http://puu.sh/5MNS This make your kick slider more readable.
Lot of straight sliders and box patterns. Try to do something more interesting. Your hit circle placement is pretty good and interesting through.
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Hard]
00:22:042 (1,2,3,4) Would be more interesting if you add a point curve the sliders .
00:25:042 (1,2,3) Boring pattern again. Make it more interesting.
00:28:042 (1,2,3,4.5) Use a higher distant snapping. 0.2x is too unexpected for a Hard.
00:37:042 (1,2) 0.9x distant snapping for these two seem better. I keep hitting it to late.
00:49:792 (5,6,7,8,9) Boring pattern, do something a little "weird" rather than straight sliders since this song is quite strange and doesn't really have a straight feeling. Perhaps remake this part to a easy jump pattern?
01:34:042 (1,2,3 1,2,3) Boring, make more interesting
02:25:979 (1,2,3,4,5) Curve them a bit.
http://puu.sh/5MPx03:06:479 (2,3,4,5 7,8,9,10) Try Zig zag pattern or something else. Box pattern feel boring.
03:14:542 (1,2,3 1,2,3) Similar to 01:34:042. Try something more interesting
Same thing as Easy, box patterns and some sliders, you should have curve them instead of keeping them straight.
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Insane]
00:23:729 (1,2,3.4) The jump feel too much. If you lower the spacing, it will be easier to read (5). Confuse me a lot the first time i play through it. If not i suggest stacking (5) with (1) & (3) so that it play better.
00:25:042 (1,2,3,4) This is Insane so try something more interesting
00:39:667 (1,2,3,4,5) Keep spacing in a stream the same or it's hard to read and hit.
02:21:292 (1,2) Put some anchor points on the slider, boring when they're both straight.
Hmm, I feel some jumps are unnecessary hard and i recommend you lower the distant snapping for jump with more than 2.0x spacing. Also, changing spacing in a middle of a combo is quite annoying, perhaps try something a little different. Compressed streams for all your streams would be nice. Overall fun to play.
No star since i really hate seeing straight sliders and box patterns (i see lot of them in your Easy & Hard).
Good luck.
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